Ch2 Pg13
Cheeko on Feb. 16, 2006
Okay, children; whoever can get this question right gets a shiny gold star!
…What do you call this?
That's right, Timmy! It's a cliffhanger!
Egads! Will Shroom catch the necklace or won't he???
I don't like this page, especially the first two panels. They're just gross and I hate them. The coloring ain't too awful, but it definitely could have been better.
Meh.
I was sick this week. Really sick, so I'm not gonna say much about it.
Just enjoy the page, everyone!
OFFICIAL REDEYE COUNTDOWN:
1 more page!
Cheeko out.
ookami the great at 5:32AM, Oct. 29, 2011
she ain't got it
Trausti_G at 5:37PM, Jan. 26, 2009
While it could have been better (by your standards), it still keeps the ball rolling (or necklace flying) in terms of speed and action.
Jallice at 6:23PM, May 31, 2008
Lol, it's better than I could do. Nice work!
Unigirl at 11:01AM, June 29, 2007
I don't think this page is bad drawn. I have seen worse. (In my sketchbook)
Cheeko at 7:17PM, Feb. 20, 2006
Woooo! Lotsa comments! Sorry for not replying sooner, everyone! :D If I don't reply to your comment, please don't be offended... there are just so many of them! ^^; Chris chis: Thank you so much, Chris! Yeah, I don't ink my comics. I just draw them in pencils and scan them. The rest is Photoshop magic. Yay! :D Fyrsiel: Wooo, really? I couldn't really make it work the way I wanted it too, but I think it works really well here. ^^ Wazaga: I feel so much better it ain't even funny. XP IagoJester: Eeep! I shouldn't have said anything...:X Tigermon: Gah! Me too! I've suddenly been having friends and family falling ill left and right! >.0 PVChan: Yay! That's what I was aiming for! ^^ OzoneOcean: Really? Thanks... I still don't think they're interesting enough to look at... Whirlwynd: Wow, thank you very much! I took a look at your "20 Galaxies" and your artwork is AMAZING! I have to take the time and read it though sometime... ^^; Spaz, MagicalMisfits, WrenMisty, Joff, Randal, Nyx, Byakko, Mjkj, MS Paintclock, Nebasa, and The Mediocre One: Thank you all so much! Your compliments make me so happy... :sniff: I looove seeing what everyone thinks is going to happen! The SUSPENSE! We'll find out next page! ;)
Whirlwynd at 4:18PM, Feb. 20, 2006
Your story is intriguing and well written - and I like the colors you use.
The mediocre one at 4:43AM, Feb. 20, 2006
I bet he dosn't catch it.
nebasa at 2:08PM, Feb. 19, 2006
Great
MSPaintClock at 9:17AM, Feb. 19, 2006
Nice coloring.
mjkj at 10:50AM, Feb. 18, 2006
I like it :) Especially panel 3 looks great :) mjkj
Byakko at 9:39AM, Feb. 18, 2006
Yaaaaaaaay!!!
Nyx at 8:23AM, Feb. 18, 2006
I thought the first two panels were fine...
Randal at 3:08AM, Feb. 18, 2006
wow, very pretty.
Ozoneocean at 3:16PM, Feb. 17, 2006
Ahhh, good hands in the last panel! Nice use of blur effects for tension and movement too. Love the blue sky panel in the middle.
Wrenmisty at 10:47AM, Feb. 17, 2006
yay another page! *huggles it*
tigermon at 8:17AM, Feb. 17, 2006
Boy, how many people are getting sick this week?? Besides myself I have found at least ten more people. Meh, well good comic.
pv_chan at 7:23AM, Feb. 17, 2006
i think it looks good, it defintly get the suspene-ey point accross XD ~PV
magicalmisfits at 4:43AM, Feb. 17, 2006
did he get it!
spaz at 3:43AM, Feb. 17, 2006
Moment of truth!
iagojester at 12:33AM, Feb. 17, 2006
What? Gross panels? Don't say that, they might hear you and be offended! If you don't tell them they're beautiful they'll never grow up! ... or something like that. I bet ten cents he doesn't catch it!
Wazaga at 11:49PM, Feb. 16, 2006
lemme guess, he misses and redeye comes out to save the day!!!!!!!! sorry to hear about you getting sick, hope you feel better.
Fyrsiel at 9:40PM, Feb. 16, 2006
DX !?!?@@_#$@#$@ SUSPENSE NOOOO!!!! His hands and the motion blur is really done well. xD
Chris chris at 9:32PM, Feb. 16, 2006
ooo rats. >.> Okay I read all through it. :D I have to say I am very glad I found this comic. The art work, though seems in sketchy form almost, is totally awesome! The sketchiness just makes it even better! The story line is interesting and it's moving at a steady pace! I'm really enjoying this comic. Keep up the hard work! *oooo... has JUST discovered the rating button...*