Ch2 Pg36
Cheeko on July 6, 2006
Just to be safe, I went ahead and posted this per automatic updater. If you're reading this, then I've been unable to find Internet Access in the course of my explorations at the beach.
Take a moment and admire the shading of Benji's mane.
Are you done admiring yet? I was really impressed with how that came out. It was a lot better than I thought it would be. I'm also quite pleased with Dart's feet. I wish I could draw them like that all the time…
Yeah… not much to say. Hopefully it's clear that's Ranu's stomach growling in the first panel. For those of you who read the original Chapter 2, you may recognize a lot of the dialogue in this scene. It's taken directly from the original.
Anybody notice how much more tattered Ranu's clothing is from his peers? No? Well, now you do and now you know why, too. Yay.
Enjoy, everyone. :)
Cheeko out.
ZoeStead at 1:10PM, July 13, 2006
Nice work!
Kare at 9:36AM, July 13, 2006
woot
Uberslug at 9:01AM, July 13, 2006
Everything is good. :)
mjkj at 12:50PM, July 10, 2006
Great :) mjkj
Fyrsiel at 10:09AM, July 10, 2006
*comments again* ....... kitty. xD
Jassination at 3:32PM, July 9, 2006
Heh, for some reason, I gave Tadashi the nickname Tada but never gave Ranu the nickname Ran. XD One thing I notice is it seems like Ranu is much dirtier. The brown on his clothes and skin really stuck out compared to Dart. And, now that you mention it, Ran's clothes do look a bit more beat up. :D
Radec at 3:27PM, July 9, 2006
what do you use to kep your lines that clean and dark, and to color your comics with?
kjanuary at 6:00PM, July 7, 2006
AWWWWW!!! *pounces on Benji*
Fyrsiel at 12:26PM, July 7, 2006
xD Wow... all these strange animal-type people... makes Ranu seem to fit right in, in a way.... *waaaai* I love the shading and colors again! xD And I do like how you've pulled off the first panel with the growling stomach. I can so hear that sound in my head.
Joff at 12:03PM, July 7, 2006
Considering what he did to those guards, if he doesn't want to stel, I'm not gonna force him
Wazaga at 6:01AM, July 7, 2006
that last panel is my favorite.
JillyFoo at 9:46PM, July 6, 2006
a noble theif?
magicalmisfits at 9:07PM, July 6, 2006
Breakfast don't be distracted.