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Cheeko on Feb. 15, 2007
This page was done so last minute that made a ton of mistakes. Like:
1st Panel: Narini's bracelets aren't colored.
1-4th Panel: I couldn't find a consistent way to color Narini's lips.
5th Panel: The string closing up the front of Orson's shirt isn't colored.
6th Panel: Part of the background (found between Narini's arm and her chest) isn't colored.
Any Panel: None of Orson's hair ties are colored.
Any Panel: No appropriate lighting.
Last Panel: Narini's eyes are monstrously crooked.
I also did a lot more cell shading than I usually do, but I actually think it looks pretty good. I may start doing it some more.
Well, I had a great week. We had two days off (because of snow and other circumstances), I played a little bit of Kingdom Hearts for the first time (which really is a great game, I've decided), and the owner wants me to come back tomorrow night to play some more. YES! I hope y'all had a Happy Valentine's/ **Single Awareness Day** (I went sledding!). If y'all liked the picture I put up on Valentine's, there's a copy of it in my dA Gallery you can look at. I write a lot more about it there.
I apologize again for not updating my fanart and links page… I've been putting a lot of my work off lately and it's coming back to bite me in the butt, so that has to be dealt with first.
I hope what's happening in this page is at least somewhat understandable.
Peace, homies.
Cheeko out.
nekodragon at 7:35PM, Nov. 28, 2008
Lol I've done that to people!
silverblades2 at 7:56PM, Feb. 22, 2008
That's mean. Funny oh yeah mischevious definitly and for her definite enjoyment toatolly but still mean.
doodleduckrp at 12:08AM, June 27, 2007
I keep liking Narini more & more. (Course, I doubt I'd enjoy being awakened in that way any more than ol' Orson does, especially if it was at all early in the morning.) By the way, "demned" is much less irritating now that I know the rationale behind it, condemned instead of just an intentional misspelling of damned. Excuse me.
Annhialator at 9:38PM, Feb. 21, 2007
you know this wake up call is kinda bittersweet.You are woken up by a hot elven-like chick but on the other hand she woke you up by scaring the hell out of you. :)
Fyrsiel at 1:08PM, Feb. 20, 2007
Dx Aaaaw that's meeeean. *wooo tarot cards*
Darkmax at 1:14PM, Feb. 19, 2007
Very Nice page!!!! Byron (The Devilfish Project)
Jassination at 9:04AM, Feb. 17, 2007
Hee, he said ass. ^_^ She pwayed a twicksies on him. :P So... she can ask cards things? o.o
jiminycricketX at 6:23AM, Feb. 17, 2007
You know, I was just thinking about this page, and I realised that whenever I read panels with Narini, I get a specific voice in my head that pretty much matches her perfectly. I wish I could think of an actress or something I could match the voice to, but I'm almost thinking Kate Blanchett as Galadriel in LotR, but without the weird dreamy Elven inflection. If that sentence made any sense.
Rainhazel at 3:23AM, Feb. 17, 2007
It's fabulous compared to your earlier pages. You're the artist, and therefore not capable of objectionable judgment of your art... It's like a law of physics or something "I draw therefore I suck". ^^; Anyways, it looks fine. I may have just woken up, but I didn't notice any of those mistakes until I read your description.
DRose at 1:56AM, Feb. 17, 2007
This page shows just how much you art has improved over the course of the story (and it was good to begin with) I've missed these characters too.
Black Dove at 9:07PM, Feb. 16, 2007
I WANT TO BE YOU SOOO BAD! XO
Joff at 3:32PM, Feb. 16, 2007
nothing like a rude awakening :)
littletrinks at 1:33PM, Feb. 16, 2007
good page, who cares if you make mistakes? Your overall comic pages leave mine covered in dust.
spaz at 9:19AM, Feb. 16, 2007
looks good to me.
PaparazziPulse at 8:39AM, Feb. 16, 2007
Very nice work, both art-wise and with dialogue. Can't say I particularly like your made-up swear words, but I understand why you have them. Keep up the good work with the story progression.
JillyFoo at 8:21AM, Feb. 16, 2007
she dreams of monsters.. how interesting.
jiminycricketX at 5:32AM, Feb. 16, 2007
I just compared this page to the first few pages with them in it. Pretty big jump in your art skills in that time. It's always fun looking over someone's archive to see the difference in quality over time. I do that with my own comic too, but my early pages are so bad they almost make my eyes bleed. That's why I'm remaking them. Anyways, you got off from school because of snow? I got off from school yesterday because my internet service was acting up and I do internet school.
RhianConway at 5:26AM, Feb. 16, 2007
*blinks* There are mistakes? Where? If I had never read your author's notes I wouldn't have noticed either. Gotta' love how artists nitpick their own work. Pretty good for last minute, gimme' your talent woman!
Maulgryve at 5:20AM, Feb. 16, 2007
wow you are really hard on yourself. I was just thinking as I was looking at the comic how awesome it was and how you have came a long way in your art since you first started this comic. I love the way you draw their heads and faces so consistent so it doesn't look like a whole new person everytime you draw a character. Good work!
Miruku at 4:50AM, Feb. 16, 2007
Hmmm, I don't think I would have noticed any of those mistakes had you not pointed them out. But they were fun to find! I definitely like the shading, too! (Although I imagine, if it was a lot more than you normally do, that it took some time). I like Narini. She's cool.
Draco109 at 4:21AM, Feb. 16, 2007
I never would have noticed those details if you hadn't pointed them out Cheeko, MAN Orson looks like family to me... it's sorta disturbing...
Wazaga at 12:25AM, Feb. 16, 2007
hee hee, I like Orson, and looks fuzzier here, how long have they been together?
MetoolX597 at 11:01PM, Feb. 15, 2007
Orson doesn't cease to amuse. Excellent job, despite the mistakes (Hawk's right; I would never have noticed if you didn't point them out).
Hawk at 10:15PM, Feb. 15, 2007
It's cool that we get to the part with Narini. She's cool. I'll be if you didn't point out mistakes, most of them would go unnoticed, Cheeko!
Darwin at 10:12PM, Feb. 15, 2007
Heh...They did say "Lord" but didn't specify...ack...Slaps hand over mouth. I just thought of another meaning for that dream...and it fits better than my last! Oh my...***waits to see if I'm right***