Ch3 Pg10
Cheeko on Feb. 22, 2007
I've been pretty miserable this week.
Lent started Wednesday. No chocolate for 40 days for me. Also, no surfing the web.
I got sick Monday. My throat has been (quite literally) on fire. I've been pouring OJ and water down my throat trying to put it out. I just end up going to the bathroom a lot. And I'm tired all the time.
I must have gotten six nosebleeds working on this one page, and because I'm sick, I have to blow my nose a lot, which ends up giving me even more. A lot of thanks to Hannah who showed me some tricks to help that.
But I heard some good news from a friend, so that helps balance it all out. :)
Kudos to the person who can find the mistakes on this page. ;)
This specific scene is going to be difficult to write. As it stands, I have something similar to a grocery list of things that need to happen, and I'm just going down the list and checking them off as I get them done. Hopefully it won't make it sound too forced or unnatural, but I want to get back to Ranu and Co.
You know, I really need to start replying to the comments again. I'm sorry I haven't been for awhile.
Milo: You know, if 1Q was made into a movie (which would be AWESOME), I may ask you for advice in casting the characters. It sounds like you picked up on Narini very well. :) Yay for internet school!
BlackDove: Nobody lives a perfect life, least of all me. I have my own share of problems, and if you want to me just because I draw okay, then… well, I don't think that's a good idea. But thanks, XD
Everyone else seemed to say they didn't really notice the mistakes until I pointed them out. Maybe I should have kept my mouth shut, huh?
Cheeko out.
Luneko at 11:25PM, Feb. 22, 2007
Narini is gorgeous, as usual. If there are errors, I can't find them.
Jassination at 10:47PM, Feb. 22, 2007
Erm... no drawstrings in the third and fifth panels? o.o Sorry, I don't really get into pointing out the mistakes. ^_^ Couldn't you, like, die from no chocolate for 40 days? o_6 If your throat was literally on fire, does that mean there was actually fire coming from your throat? If so, could you take a picture? That'd be awesome! :P ... Maybe you should see a doctor... or... something. Normally, when I have a cold, I'd sniff salt water... Not sure what that'd do for a bloody nose though. Might be good... I think... I like how Narini and Orson are reacting towards each other. XD
Hawk at 10:10PM, Feb. 22, 2007
Narini's so cool. I can't wait to find out more about these two.