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Cheeko on Aug. 23, 2007
Hi, guys!
First, let me say I'm sorry to several people: Peta, for STILL not getting her birthday picture done, to Sarah, for not getting back to her about her wonderful story, to Wazzy, for not emailing her in awhile, to Evil Emperor Nick, for not replying to that lovely note he sent me awhile ago, to NPC Girl, for not showing off that wonderful piece of fanart she's made me or even commenting on it, and to everyone else on deviantArt, for not posting things in a regular fashion. I've used this excuse so much in the past few months, but I'm going to have to use it again: I've been massively busy and unable to actually get anything done. I moved into my lovely new dorm room back at the university, I was helping Freshmen move in these past few days, and then I had to drive back home because I forgot several things. I got lost on the way, one of the most terrifying experiences of my life that I hope not to repeat. But the very instant I get the chance, I'll spend a massive amount of time getting back to all of you, I swear.
…But y'all have probably learned better by now than to expect anything right away, or at all from me. At least I'm still updating One Question regularly, eh?
This page will probably be the most text-heavy one of the entire chapter. That really tells you what you have to look forward to, right? I know there's a lot of talking in this comic, but it's only the beginning and I'm really hoping to change that aspect of it. Hopefully there will be a lot of things going on and not so much dialogue that people get intimidated and stop reading. Meh.
Cheeko out.
Jassination at 9:50AM, Oct. 11, 2009
Not so much reading? Meh, I think you word things fine, so they're easy to read. =D And the prettiness helps with that, too. ^_^ Back to the comic. OH SNAP. O.O ... Hmm... seems I shoulda had more to say. o.6 Ranu's, not, like, gonna die like the sexy stable boy from the first chapter, is he? o.o
PaparazziPulse at 4:23PM, Sept. 1, 2007
I love that line: "I can't even read!" The whole page is really well-made.
polo at 3:36PM, Aug. 29, 2007
This is a beautiful comic!
kavonn at 11:58AM, Aug. 26, 2007
Legit excuse, kindness to the *lowly* freshmen. *is very glad she is no longer one*
dragonki at 1:24PM, Aug. 25, 2007
oh... ok =P
man in black at 7:42PM, Aug. 24, 2007
don't worry about the deviant art thing, everyone gets busy or has a world crashing around them thing every once or more
littletrinks at 6:05PM, Aug. 24, 2007
uh oh
Evil Emperor Nick at 8:26AM, Aug. 24, 2007
That is something I've always liked about this comic is the fact that that character no only are bearfoot but you do a good job drawing beat feet. For some reason most people seem to have a great problem with this. The only other series I can note which seems unafraid to draw characters like this is Ah My Goddess. On a side note I never noticed those red marks on the side of his face before. As for thanking me, if you really want to thank me then keep updating, get into the top five and knock the weapon out of there. It drives me nuts that good comics like this are way down the list while the weapon (no offense to anyone who likes it) and others which are just average but update a lot are sitting pretty near the top.
Wazaga at 7:21AM, Aug. 24, 2007
busy is a very good excuse, and often the truest one. so take your time and have a good learning year. and try not to get lost again, k?
Chameleon at 6:39AM, Aug. 24, 2007
eeek... how in the world is he going to get out of this alive *shivers* I love this comic and would read it even if you only updated once a month ;) just keep updating :)
Darwin at 5:57AM, Aug. 24, 2007
We understand life intrudes! Heh, I know mine does! I didn't even get my Friday comic done...I've only posted a draft!! LOL! Beautiful page none the less Cheeko! I really like how you've drawn us into Ranu's head! Poor kid, like his mother he can't catch a break... And it looks like ole ugly caught up to him as well! Great stuff, and don't stress if you can't get us pages every single time by the deadline...we understant that it can't always happen!
DCraig at 5:28AM, Aug. 24, 2007
Those claws look sharp. I'm on the edge of my seat. How's he going to get out of this? See you next week.
ce33 at 4:51AM, Aug. 24, 2007
you're still doing a good job.
Black Dove at 12:21AM, Aug. 24, 2007
Oh no his gonna trip!
JillyFoo at 12:08AM, Aug. 24, 2007
I'm really getting a sense of 3Dness from this shading of yours. Nice character drama too.
Freux at 10:37PM, Aug. 23, 2007
I have but one critique! ..I think his foot is backwards in the second panel. o_O Or maybe I'm looking at it wrong. Gah, your stuff still looks gorgeous, though
hpkomic at 10:08PM, Aug. 23, 2007
I like the texturing in panel one. Stiiiiiiiiiiiiill don't like your choice in fonts that much though. :(