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Cheeko on Nov. 8, 2007
I, Cheeko, here do vow never again to post such terrible things and dare to call them comic pages. I also vow never to put off coloring any comic pages until the night before they should be posted, and I will most certainly not ever get behind in my page production ever again.
Again, you have my sincere apologies, everyone. I have failed you as a comic artist, for this page is mucho feo. (That means very ugly in Spanish. Go me.)
Aaagh, what a week. On Wendesday I walked into my Geography class and my teacher said, “Okay, put your stuff away, I'm handing out the exam now!” and I said “…what?” And then today I signed up for my classes next semester, which is always such a stressful and terrifying experience because usually everyone else gets to the classes you want before you do. Luckily I've got a nice schedule I'm really excited about, but it also looks like I'm going to be busy most of the time. And THEN I have to read “A Passage to India” for my History class by next week, and that thing is huge. Not to mention the fact that I still owe someone a picture of Captain America and I haven't even started inking the next page yet.
Aaaah, I love college! :D
Hey, I found a really cool webcomic last night. It has a great story line with fantastic dialogue, and the art (especially the backgrounds) are flippin' amazing. It's about my favorite horror monster, which automatically makes it a new favorite. :) It's called http://www.webcomicsnation.com/dirktiede/ps/series.php?view=archive I can't wait to see what they do. :)
Cheeko out.
EDIT: Fixed the page so that the scratches from the previous one are actually present. Thanks for catching that, Emperor Nick. :)
While I appreciate everyone's comments, this page still sucks. Thank you all nonetheless. :)
Foaly123 at 5:52PM, March 20, 2009
I agree with Argent_Nightmare. It's better than what I could do.... then again a 3rd grader is probably better at drawing than I am.
Poul at 11:19AM, Aug. 23, 2008
Wauw
blenheimbard at 1:12AM, Dec. 1, 2007
thanks for the tip Paradigm Shift is quite amazing
blenheimbard at 12:42AM, Dec. 1, 2007
Cheeko, get a grip. You don't have to apoligize, it works for me and obviously a lot of others.
D0m at 1:29PM, Nov. 15, 2007
Fantastic looking page.
Maverik at 6:58AM, Nov. 13, 2007
Heh, ain't college grand? And I still like the page even if you don't, so there. : )
Chameleon at 6:10AM, Nov. 12, 2007
awesome fight scene ;) and thanks for the link to the other comic.. it's good TOO ;)
xanos at 4:34AM, Nov. 12, 2007
CHEEKO! STOPIT! your art is the kind that inspires people!!! tou have a way of taking realistic stuff and turning it into a cartoon! stop being hard on yerself! (then again the fact that this page is not your best and everyone likes it so much has to say SOMETHING) however! you must not look on your work and frown. instead of saying how BAD it is just look at it a way to improve everyone gets better at art as you go along and as far as I can tell I and others I know are nowhere CLOSE, so don't beat yerself up about your comic not blinding people with majesty! be glad that it makes others envy! (like me!!!!!!!) 5s all acrosss go dart! (though I AM partial to lizards.... should I be the only one against dart? ~~; how about: heres to dart NOT getting killed by the lizard of awesomness?
JillyFoo at 10:51PM, Nov. 11, 2007
I met that guy that makes PS at a few cons. Pretty nice dude. Paradigm Shift...okay it's good but I find it too hard to read online. So much dialogue. The print's fabulous though. My attention span's longer offline. Now this page. It's awesome. No words. Just the action. Dart is pretty tough taken on a soldier and all.
littletrinks at 8:02PM, Nov. 9, 2007
the page is much better than my work so i can't complain, it does seem alittle blurry though... All in all, good page!
lennan at 2:53PM, Nov. 9, 2007
Well, I think the pages tell the story at very good pace, so that the reader is engaged and in this one where it's mostly action you do a really good job. And to be honest, although you do not think much of your backgrounds, I quite like them, and each new page shows how much progress you are making in skill. Skills can always be improved, so don't be too discouragedl =) That being said, I prefer your characterization and expression to Paradigm Shift's, which I think is very important in a story. SO I'll stop talking like I know things now. ;) but keep up the good work
ShinGen at 8:16AM, Nov. 9, 2007
Cheeko seriously everything you do is awesome. A person couldn't throw a rock within a mile radius of you without hitting an awesome barrier. Your work is amazing and there's really nothing wrong with this page. You're an amazing artist and ya needa stop being so hard on yourself. Trust me. Most people here wish they could do the things you do. Great page, great work. =)
Bob the Hobo at 7:58AM, Nov. 9, 2007
STOP BEING SO HARD ON YOURSELF!!! If anyone should make you feel bad, it's me. Brothers do that to people It looks great.
Bob the Hobo at 7:58AM, Nov. 9, 2007
STOP BEING SO HARD ON YOURSELF!!! If anyone should make you feel bad, it's me. Brothers do that to people It looks great.
man in black at 7:50AM, Nov. 9, 2007
still looks good, though
Evil Emperor Nick at 7:00AM, Nov. 9, 2007
What happened to their wounds from the last page? While I agree with most posters you are being to hard on yourself and this is a decent page, it is fair to say this isn't your best work.
scifiwim at 4:07AM, Nov. 9, 2007
I'll say, these guys have stamina! They go on as if nothing hit them! The chaotic page layout is perfect for showing the flurry of the fight. Beautiful ! I'm starting to be very curious now who's gonna win... I enjoy paradigm shift as well, but I like One Question better. Drawing is more to my liking and it's pace is a bit faster. And... colour!!!
DCraig at 3:51AM, Nov. 9, 2007
I guess I don't see want you see. Who's winning, anyway? I can't tell.
Veran at 3:27AM, Nov. 9, 2007
horray i HAVE READ THROUGHT YER ARCHIVE AND I THINK THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! sorry for the caps ^^; fave,five and kudos
Hawke at 12:44AM, Nov. 9, 2007
Paradigm Shift is really good, but it doesn't always update every week. In any case, just because you have a different style doesn't mean your artwork isn't as good, just drawn differently. Paradigm shift is extrordinarily well drawn, but there are worse comics out there that people enjoy just as much, if not more. So you might be having an off day, this page is still frekking awesome. Plus: you have COLOR.
Argent_Nightmare at 10:08PM, Nov. 8, 2007
Pff. I have no idea WHAT THE HELL you are talking about. This is an *excellent* page, as always. Aaaand, I'll be sure to check out that comic... tomorrow. xD