Ch4 Pg22
Cheeko on Jan. 6, 2008
Hopefully what's happening on this page is understandable. If not, I'll completely redraw it. I've really disappointed myself with these last few pages. At the very least, I was able to figure out how I could make the perspective work on this page, after about an hour of struggling with a ruler.
In regards to coloring: this page was finished a while before the previous one was posted, so I was unable to use what tips I received regarding night colors and lighting. This is the same case for the next page, but the one after that will (hopefully) show improvements.
Anyhoo.
Technically, it isn't Monday for me as I'm uploading this via automatic updater. I'm typing all this on a Saturday, the day before I begin the long drive back to school. I have a lot to do tomorrow, like move all my stuff back into the dorm, start hunting for a job next year, and memorize my schedule. For now, at least, I'll enjoy what relaxing hours I have left, preferably going to see “The Water Horse” or playing Super Mario Galaxy. Only 24 stars to go!
See you all Friday. :)
Cheeko out.
Stig Hemmer at 5:12PM, Jan. 10, 2008
Not a climber, eh?
scifiwim at 7:35AM, Jan. 9, 2008
Yup, it's perfectly clear what's happening. Great use of perspective and executed well!!! I like the night/lizzardvision in the first panel. Realy adds to the atmosphere. In panel 3 I am forcefully reminded of T-rex coming around the corner. Very menacing. Thumbs up for this comic!
Evil Emperor Nick at 6:46AM, Jan. 9, 2008
I gotta be honest I don't like this page. It is way to dark and more then a little hard to get at least on the monitor I am using. That said, I like what you are trying to do on this page. It is a good idea I just can't really see any details due to how dark it is.
JillyFoo at 4:35PM, Jan. 7, 2008
Don't you dare redo it. I like it!
RhianConway at 1:56PM, Jan. 7, 2008
I like the flash of the foot, very nice touch.
Maverik at 12:37PM, Jan. 7, 2008
Awesome page!! I love the effects of the first panel and the extreme perspective of the last one. ...and I want to tickle Ranu's foot. xD
lennan at 9:35AM, Jan. 7, 2008
That was a massively cool evil grin from lizard man there. The nasty pleasure was quite chilling to see. I like the interesting perspective shots, yay for different camera angles! =) And really what is it with bad guys and under-estimating children who live by their wits? XD So in short, no, the page explains itself well. =)
jiminycricketX at 7:02AM, Jan. 7, 2008
My suggestion to Ranu: [b]Dump the book.[/b] Lovely page, the perspective and backgrounds are great.
Nega Link at 6:59AM, Jan. 7, 2008
Way cool! I love the predatoresque lizard-vision in the first panel. The blood on his face and sword looks great as well.
DCraig at 5:07AM, Jan. 7, 2008
Can lizard boy climb like a lizard? Let's hope not! You've earned your 5 again.
Wazaga at 4:48AM, Jan. 7, 2008
wow, I think the dimensions in this page and the way it flows far out shines anything I've ever done. excellent work girl!
warofwinds at 10:12PM, Jan. 6, 2008
As a quick fix for night colors, choose a dark, mid-saturated blue and put it over all the color layers. Change the layer properties to "color," and mess with the opacity. Lots of blues really make a night scene "nightish" and it can be done without re-coloring. Great page! Love the perspective.
Darwin at 10:02PM, Jan. 6, 2008
It looks good to me!! And again he eludes his pursuit!