fesworks at 2:55PM, Aug. 11, 2008

BTW, I thank you for giving your opinion on my strips :) If I don't get called out, I don't think I'll improve as much from an amateur webcomicker ;)

fesworks at 2:53PM, Aug. 11, 2008

Yea yea, I probably should have gone back and fixed that, but I've been pressed for time getting about 3x a week up. Excuses, excuses, i know :P I'll get better at catching these things ;) The "no mouth" was supposed to help my "you're looking at her froma different angle, so you can;t see her mouth. Obviously I don;t know how to pull it off properly yet, but I tired of the same 3/4 head turn in most cases. I suck at the 1/4 behind the head, and the "dead-on" look. I'm OK with the side-profile most of the time... I don't ever get better without practicing these things, and PSI was always designed to be the experimental, practice comic for me :P Still, with all my errors, I'm mostly happy with keeping a FAIRLY decent update schedule of 3x per full week.... if not always on the intended MWF. :P It's important for the coming months ;)

Character Core at 1:23PM, Aug. 11, 2008

Odd coincidence, Nemi bounding with a fur and Reevo bonding with a human. On two artistic notes to this page, Nemi looks strange without a mouth. Not wrong, mind you, just strange. What does look wrong is her right hand bracelet in the final panel. The perspective is almost painfully wrong. Thankfully it is such a minor piece of the picture it is easy enough to glaze over it as a reader.