ok i know this is like 3 years later and you may never read this but i hope you consider contiuing because i have already fallen in love with your art, and the story interests me, even if it is only the first page
I can tell that it's a feather!
I think this works, as far as fist pages go- it sets up a somber mood, and I think that's good. It will contrast nicely with the happier stuff later on and it also helps the reader feel sympathy for the character. As long as you dont make the following pages overblown and angsty, this page works very well in my humble opinion.
Nicely done!
CelestialTeez at 3:58PM, Feb. 1, 2011
ok i know this is like 3 years later and you may never read this but i hope you consider contiuing because i have already fallen in love with your art, and the story interests me, even if it is only the first page
deepcheese at 1:26PM, May 4, 2008
I can tell that it's a feather! I think this works, as far as fist pages go- it sets up a somber mood, and I think that's good. It will contrast nicely with the happier stuff later on and it also helps the reader feel sympathy for the character. As long as you dont make the following pages overblown and angsty, this page works very well in my humble opinion. Nicely done!