pg-4 "Waking up"
souris on May 3, 2007
Waking up…
I was going to do it in black and white, started to add color (went crazy) and didn't erase the old grey marks, so it looks weird. I like the first 3 panels (the eyes) though. But the rest looks like it was colored by an enthusiastic 6 yr. old (apologises to all 6 yr. olds). colored lines under text won't remain, like I said I went crazy. Art will go back to resembling pg3 on ~pg7.
Comments are apreciated, they tell me how i'm doing.
*Wow! i've been getting a lot of comments! thanks!
souris at 12:42AM, May 5, 2007
Meh...having a character not know anything makes explaining easier, or less weird.
kingofsnake at 8:21AM, May 4, 2007
For some reason this reminds me of old text based nintendo games. Like Deja Vu