pg-7 "Engarde' "

souris on May 13, 2007

She's gotten herself into a fight…now how to get out alive.
My atempt at a fight scene. BA!

I need some advice:
the next page (as is) is a bit graphic and has the heroine being a bit heartless. I have an alternate page outlined (as in sketch/not done), which is a bit less graphic and has her seem less blood-thirsty, but means more work(for me) and it is harder to understand what's going on.
So the Question is: should I stick with the original or work on the alternate? Response must be in by Thursday! THANKS!

Next Page up Friday. and Monday's is uploaded too.