Chapter 1 : Desperation
Sleeping Terror on Jan. 16, 2010
Welcome back to phantasmagoria, please, do come in~
Remember kids, living your life trying to be the best is wrong, especially when you get severely overkilled and then run through the streets in a vain attempt at trying to go down with some dignity, only to run into an Abomasnow…~ Wait…~
In retrospect, giving Felicity long hair makes spriting her from behind a lot easier~!
Discuss guys, tell me what you think~! I know it isn't as amazing as the last two, but sadly this battles over~
melvin2898 at 7:18PM, Jan. 17, 2010
Use Body Slam! @SuperPee It's super large for me. @Lexxorodius and Sleeping Terror I like Sleeping Terror's bubbles.On some of the other comics if you don't do what Lexxorodius said it would look bad but this looks great!
Sleeping Terror at 2:24PM, Jan. 17, 2010
Ok, I'll start doing that then. The only reason I wasn't doing so was because I was trying to make the comic seem different to other comics. ^^'
Lexxorodius at 2:13PM, Jan. 17, 2010
the only complaint- put stroke around text bubbles.sure its more effort, but its totally worth the end product.
Sleeping Terror at 11:34AM, Jan. 17, 2010
Yeah, I don't get why its so small either. Only being able to see two lines of text sucks, but its mostly aesthetic. I'll have to have a look at the html. Anyway, thanks for the comment. ^^
Superpee at 10:21AM, Jan. 17, 2010
What with the "Leave a comment" box? It's so small, I can barely read what I type. =[ Nice page btw, but although your close-ups and such look rather well, there's still room for improvement. ;)
Snowninja at 9:57AM, Jan. 17, 2010
Wow! Good effects! Awesome comic page!