Thanks for your advice. Im using photoshop but not really any filters or anything, the last three comics were cooked up in about an hour, so perhaps if i spent more time. But yeah ill heed your advice
I'm gonna be honest.
This needs work. You are going for a contour line look and it's just not being pulled off. It looks like you use MS paint, which isn't a good thing, I'd suggest photoshop. The story seems okay, but the art style is just too lacking to keep me interested, because I don't know what's going on. Practice makes perfect, and you aren't off to a bad start.
Losttallows at 9:13PM, Oct. 15, 2006
Thanks for your advice. Im using photoshop but not really any filters or anything, the last three comics were cooked up in about an hour, so perhaps if i spent more time. But yeah ill heed your advice
hysellt at 7:24PM, Oct. 15, 2006
I'm gonna be honest. This needs work. You are going for a contour line look and it's just not being pulled off. It looks like you use MS paint, which isn't a good thing, I'd suggest photoshop. The story seems okay, but the art style is just too lacking to keep me interested, because I don't know what's going on. Practice makes perfect, and you aren't off to a bad start.