Early Morning

Ozoneocean on Feb. 12, 2006

News
This week’s writer’s challenge is Pinky TA. Go to the forums and write a short fanfic on Pinky TA. Those entries are pretty good, check them out! ^_^

Page description:
Cc’s cargo ship cruises in to the harbour at Tunis in the early morning. Cc can see that there’s activity and tension in the area… Ships are patrolling and lights are on. A small patrol vessel comes alongside to allow marines to board and investigate. The captain cleverly changes his name from light to dark… (not that you’d notice). Cc dives over the side with the rubbish.

Commentary:
The text is a bit tiny here, you’ll have to squint! There aren’t too many errors here… The ship is a bit high in the water for one so old, the sailors in the bottom left panel are a little squat, and some of the text is a bit small. It took a bit of research to get the design of the ship right, it’s all made-up but at least it doesn’t diverge too far from reality. I had a lot of fun with the texture and details here, especially the light reflections. The perspective was a bastard.

Writer's challenge!
Do the writer’s challenge It’s a fun way to practise your writing ^_^
(Next challenge is on Wednesday the 15th)

A note:
Go to my main site for the latest work (10th February, 2006). I’m uploading one page a day with commentary and explanations here.