fight
Ozoneocean on Feb. 24, 2006
Page description:
Cc refuses to leave when asked, she pulls out a pistol to demonstrate just how serious she is. Upon being asked to remove her dress at the point of a gun, the receptionist takes exception; kicking it out of Cc's hand. Cc grabs at the woman's raised leg, and she grapples with Cc. The woman knew Cc couldn't shoot her without brining the building down on her (so to speak), and she says so as they tussle, grasping each others clothes. Cc's shirt rips and the woman no longer has a hold on her. Cc makes a dire statement.
Commentary:
Well this took longer than I wanted it to, and the backgrounds are cursory at best. But it's not about the backgrounds here, this is simply action. I dunno what else to say really, there's a bit of a return to sexiness here, lots of view of thighs and Cc's bottom: Traditional Pinky TA. As I commented last time, I'm weaning it back to the Pinky TA style but this style fits this little interlude.
Oh yes, HAPPY BIRTHDAY to my mum for the 24th ^_^
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A note:
Go to my main site for the latest work (25th February, 2006). I'm uploading one page a day with commentary and explanations here.
grothmag at 10:09AM, April 10, 2008
Looks very nice, I do like the dance effect as others have mentioned. I find - and this is my own flaw, not that of the comic - that because of reading on a smallish monitor, I tend to be uncertain how the irregular panels flow. I had to re-assemble the three panels under the circle based on their content - because I read the outer panels first (in fact, the RIGHT panel first), working my way in. Strange I know, but it's because the center panel is offset downwards, and the right panel begins above the left panel, so I was all messed up. One last nitpick, in the shirt-ripping panel, CC's navel is distractingly dark - deep it may be, but it shouldn't be like a black hole at this distance. Black works fine for distance shots like the previous panel.
Ozoneocean at 5:05PM, March 10, 2006
Here at Pinky TA we listen to and appreciate what our readers are saying about us, and just to show how much we appreciate you we've taken your suggestions into account and re-done this page of the comic. For [i]you[/i], our readers! Yes indeedy, The page is FIXED now ok? Yes. It's all better. Responing: Thanx Alej! Sh's a fierce one, but Cc gets her own back. Kagomas: Bitches or cats? opinion's divided on this point... ^^
alejkhan at 11:20AM, March 6, 2006
Oh no she didn't! Shirt tearing is fightin' words man. We'll fightin' activities anyway. i knew the cool "secretary" chic would be super cool. ^_^
Kagomas at 9:32AM, March 6, 2006
Shirt ripping......bitch fighting.....o_O
Ozoneocean at 6:36PM, March 5, 2006
Thanx guys. Thanx Whirly ^^ Thanx Marine- the skin tones are just taken from the backgrounds too ^^ Ah Spaz.... There are no real backgrounds there, but I could do something like the old speedline trick. Ah-ha, the receptionist Vino? Well, well well... I can say nothing ^_^
Whirlwynd at 9:24AM, March 5, 2006
Intriguing - I like the receptionist's design =)
marine at 8:02AM, March 5, 2006
I was talking more about the characters, you've got flesh tones down pretty well now. All you need to do now is pimp your word baloons.
spaz at 7:57AM, March 5, 2006
You can fix the static feeling of the action by changing the persepective of the action panels. Make the perspective angles very dynamic.
VinoMas at 9:54PM, March 4, 2006
it's so great to see new pages and the evolution of this story. Although I miss Pinky I'm loving the receptionist. Looking forward to you considering making her a main character. What great pin up shots of Pinky, CC, and receptionist together!
Ozoneocean at 5:45PM, March 4, 2006
Thanx for that guys. Sorry for the slowness of the updates, I've been held up by work and now that I'm finishing the page I'm being a perfectionist again with the art. Still not enough backgrounds in it though. Some lovely tips here, thanks for that unamed person! I may even make some changes to this page based on your suggestions ^_^ My figure drawing skills have gone to crap... Thanks Marine! I like 'em too. They actually come mostly from a single background gradient about 2 pages back. I just cut it out and stretched it and rotated it to fit... expanding certain bits of it for certain panels. Lightening some and darkening others Thanx Lothar ^^ That happens sometimes. Aw Guitar, She's not wearing any panties... ^_^ Seriously though, it's just a view behind the flap of her flapping, unzipped bathing suit top. It's my favourite panel! (apart from panel 7). If I change the kick pose then I'll change her expression there. ^_^ Thanx for the crit HPK. I feel it too. I reckon it'd probably look better if I reversed the kicking panel. Thanks Rana. Ha Jon! ^^ Watch that pussy fur fly.
marine at 4:17PM, March 4, 2006
Love the colors.
lothar at 11:42AM, March 4, 2006
i thought i alredy commented on this page !! how strange !@ ITS AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!
guitar at 10:31AM, March 4, 2006
The color is good as always. But i still say it needs more facial expression. And push the pose more dynamic. One thing i think it really hurt this page is the up-short on the girls panties. It seems to dominant the entire page, which takes away the attention of all the actions scene.
hpkomic at 4:12AM, March 2, 2006
I see this going to very SEXY palces, but I have a major crit. The action feels static, like in panels 4 and 5. I don't really feel the quickness or the impact. Aside from that, nice as ever.
Jon Hanson at 8:28PM, March 1, 2006
Cat fight! :D
Ozoneocean at 3:05PM, March 1, 2006
Thanx guys!!!!! Sorry for the slowness to update though... I've had some unexpected work to do this week, which means I haven't had as much sleep. Good to see you back Silus!!! ^_^ Hahahahaha! Don't worry about it Grim. No sweat man ^^ thanx emmotional. Aw sorry Hamm, I'll see what I can do. thanx Barb, good to see you round again ^^ Argh Chy, please give me a panel number? Ya, there's a lot of stiffness here. -Ooo, that's a bit dirty actually ^^ Well not quite naked Sub, but certianly sexy! thanx Kyupol. Oh yes Strongbad, many years of srt school. But I'm losing the skills slowly now... Thanx Zoe! I'm surprised how well the circle worked out ^_^
silus at 1:23PM, March 1, 2006
Bloody hell! You've done loads since I last read! Nice one, still brilliant.
Grim at 11:53AM, March 1, 2006
Grrr, sorry. Feel free to erase my vote there. Utter and total mistake. =/
Emotional at 7:55PM, Feb. 28, 2006
WOO HOO!!!
Hamorhage at 11:04AM, Feb. 28, 2006
You gotto hit us with some Pinky Juice Ozone...I miss Pinky! Cc is way more then I could handle...but Pinky..sniff :) Ye..I'm kinda impatient
iowabarbidoll at 6:54AM, Feb. 28, 2006
I really like the color story you are using with this scene. Very nice! ~B
cresc at 6:04AM, Feb. 28, 2006
A chick fight ho hum (more! more) Sorry to say the panel with her catching her leg looks a bit stiff.
subcultured at 3:12PM, Feb. 27, 2006
gotta love those panty shots, and i like em when they kick high. i want some naked wrestling, dammit! ^_^
strongbad_999 at 10:18PM, Feb. 26, 2006
Hey...did you ever study art in school or something? Skills like these don't just spring up overnight. ...Unless you consult the skill fairy... ...Who has yet to call me back...
ZoeStead at 12:38PM, Feb. 26, 2006
So much wonderous detail! Love that circular panel, it's things like that which mark you out as a pro, my friend :D Big woots to you and this amazing page. WOOT!