Sparring
Ozoneocean on March 7, 2006
Page description:
The receptionist’s dress tears and they separate. If Cc wants to use the dress as a disguise it’ll be a bit harder now that it’s damaged. The receptionist reaches for a stiletto hidden in her stocking top, Cc swings the ripped material threateningly… The receptionist reveals her blade and drops the bit of Cc’s shirt as she makes a threat. Cc prepares to meet the blade as the receptionist comes for her.
Commentary:
Sorry I was so long about updating. I had a lot of work last week and this week I’ve just gotten over one of the worst headaches of my life… Lots of pain that no pills had any effect on, ice packs didn’t work, pressing my temples had zero effect and I filled a bucket with everything I ate, as well as bitter bile… Yeah, that was nasty. I worked extra hard to make this page look good though.
SarahN at 10:00AM, March 24, 2006
...me no comment? That's unpossible! Anyway, much coolness here. You really know your anatomy. =P
marine at 8:33AM, March 22, 2006
I made it back from vegas!
bobo_81 at 11:23PM, March 21, 2006
Agreed on that left part of the 3rd panel comment.
Gillsing at 2:44PM, March 17, 2006
It sure is difficult to tear my eyes away from the left part of the third panel. T&A is nice, but it just gets so much better with a promise of lethal violence. And hey, the only tiny little nit left for me to pick in the previous page is this one: In the retouched second panel the fabric between the breasts should probably be arced (or stretched, like on CC's top) rather than wedged. But that's such a tiny, tiny thing, isn't it? ;)
mickasso at 11:20AM, March 15, 2006
Catttttfigggghhhhhtttt!
Li Li at 2:51AM, March 15, 2006
Stabby stabby from the receptionist. ^.^
PolarMagnet at 8:28PM, March 14, 2006
Oh drat. I forgot to rate this page...here you go! =)
PolarMagnet at 8:27PM, March 14, 2006
Wwwwwwow. I'm nearly speechless! (Nearly) I love the outline of the knife through her stockings- they look like silk. Are they supposed to be silk? I see them as being silk. Also, how much did you make your characters work out until you decided that their bodies will be 'up to par' for this comic? Their bodies are FANTASTIC!
marine at 5:23AM, March 13, 2006
It is autobigraphical. I'm always bringing in wierdos to peoples houses. Especially people I barely know.
Jenshin at 9:35PM, March 12, 2006
Ha ha ha! Now this is an interesting turn of events.. Your architecture is amazing.. All those little details - how do you keep track of them all in your head?
EinKun at 6:11AM, March 12, 2006
re ozone: =P Oh well... I guess, maybe if one would jump around like an insane maniac XD then prolly the pointy tip will poke ya! >_
WayneEnterprise at 11:45PM, March 11, 2006
real nice ass shot
lothar at 6:29PM, March 11, 2006
COOL ! its gonna be like a BULL fight exept with SEXY ladies instead of the ALTERNATIVE to that , wich would not be nearly as HOT !!!!
simonitro at 9:19PM, March 10, 2006
Oh... it's gonna be a blood bath! That gothic looking chick is hot!
alejkhan at 6:08PM, March 10, 2006
oooh, sexy. Lovely dress even now that it's been altered. fight fight fight! (I hope you are feeling better now...)
kyupol at 6:00PM, March 10, 2006
nice ass shot. :)
Ozoneocean at 5:10PM, March 10, 2006
I know the main prob;em with expressions now... I usually always draw eyes, without them people don't like my faces much ^_^ Well I just fixed up the last page and you should see the difference! Office: Thanx man There'll be a bit more fighting for ya, no worries about that! Kirstin, (so much better than saying "Green"): It's quite underboobular here, with no bras in sight or on site for that matter... Emotional Jadewinter: Thanx so much man! It's my favourite too ^_^
Office_Zone at 10:09AM, March 10, 2006
I am enjoying this confrontation.... GREATLY! MIX IT UP, LADIES!
Green_Tangerine at 11:03PM, March 9, 2006
Underboob... it's official. CC doesn't wear bras! I'm telling.
Emotional at 9:00PM, March 9, 2006
I'v decided to comment on this update :P I really like the 3rd panel XD alot.
coinilius at 8:15PM, March 9, 2006
Stiff in there poses, mostly - like I said, the receptionist has that whole cool, calm 'I'm going to kill you as easily as I swat a fly' type demenear, but Cc is so ramrod straight all the time in these fights, it seems odd. A more 'relaxed' stance would be more natural (relaxed as in looser, easier to move quickly).
Ozoneocean at 4:21PM, March 9, 2006
Response time⦠But first Iâd just like to say that the figure drawing in the last page was very much below par and I thank everyone who brought that to my notice! In future Iâd really appreciate if you told me things like that some more ^_^ I need to know when Iâm being lazy and failing like that and I love people to help me that way ^_^ So thanks. A redraw should happen soon. Ok Thanx to Silas and Kam for their votes ^^ Einkun: Good to see you back, thanks for the comment ^^. Well the flat of the blade is flat against a part of the leg that doesnât move against it. Being straight also means the edge doesnât get you really⦠Stilettos are more a worry for their points anyway. Barb: Thanks for your concern Barb ^^ And thanks for the great compliments too. Iâm glad you notice the different colours in the panels ^_^ Nick: Thanks Nick, good to know my attempt at action is working here. I have to try and keep it up for the next page⦠ChrisJ Thanx Chris! I was so happy with how this page turned out!. Fork: Aw, you donât wanna see them hurt do you? No, of course not! You want to see them naked! Hahahahaha Sub: Ah, the style is good when it works ^^ I donât know how Iâm going to get back into my old style again thoughâ¦. Mad-Maz-Mazzzoooooo: Nice sound effects man. ^^ Ha, ya, the last panel could be a bullfight or a strip tease! Hehe, Itâs also a bit of a joke on her disguise with the niqaab (veil). Hawk: Thanx hawk! Although I like to keep the tummies smooth of too much muscle definition on the wimmins, just in case they end up too manly, haha! Spaz: You canâât fool me! Youâre not talking about the knife are you? ;p Ccs: not [i]too[/i] revealing though eh? Joff: Oh no oneâs going to stop [i]this[/i] fight except on of the participants⦠Ham: Ha, thank [b]you[/b] ham ^_^ Very perceptive. Cloth is a good defensive heaping generally against a short blade. Old rapier duellists used to fight with a cloak in one hand. Madscott: oh thereâs be a fight alright ^^ After a fashion⦠Hero: Yeah, her face is fairly expressionless. Any more advice on it though, how should it be? I do like to know ^^ Yup, Theyâre âa callinâ each other out! HPK: Yes, the underboob is a country worth exploring thoroughly! We shall christen t this the underboob sequence! Crazy: Thanx Crazy, Iâm happy with it too ^^ Aurora: Thank you ^^ Then consider this torn clothes sequence dedicated to you ^_^ X3022: thanks so much man! Glad you noticed the cured panel! Hopefully Iâll get the next pages to work as neatly. Aussie, aussie aussie, oi, oi oi!: Yep, safer to bet on Cc in this instance. Strongbad dude!: Yes, isnât that weird⦠^_^ Thanks man. Coin: Yup I was in a VERY bad way but Iâm all better right now. ^^ Stiff? How so? In poses, speech, or both? Ya, sheâs a calm one, Iâm glad that comes through ^_^ Thatâs the kind of angry characterâs I like. Iago: Hahaha love the thing about the cartwheel! ^_^ Does the rip effect sound realistic? Yes, her face is completely invisible here. Ruka: ALLLLLlllllmost a catfight⦠except these gals wonât be biting, so they donât have to worry about abscesses so much and the problem with getting doses of antibiotics⦠But I wouldnât mind slipping these pussies the thermometer in the recovery room⦠Hahaha, stupid naughty humour there. Iâve taken too many real catfight victims to the vets. :P
EinKun at 10:17PM, March 8, 2006
Wouldn't hiding a knife in your stockings like that be dangerous? XD I mean my legs would be bleeding by then. =P Either way kool as always!
iowabarbidoll at 8:54PM, March 8, 2006
Michael- Sorry to hear you have been sick. Hope you are over that now. Another splendid page here, one would never know that you were down with anything! Again, I love the color story of this whole scene, great panel layouts! ~B
Nick at 8:21PM, March 8, 2006
This is a page full of excellent suspense and tension. Well paced, sir.