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Ozoneocean on June 19, 2007
Page description:
First they survey the scene then on Cc's urging they head on down to have a look to see what they can find. And while the troops are busy Pinky tries to fish for some more info.
Commentary:
A few hours late. Sorry about that. Jebus I hate doing the lettering and speech bubbles! I hope this doesn't look too washed out? Since my computer trouble I haven't got the colour on my monitors setup the way it used to be. One is set to make things look lovely and rich and the other is set for brightness (so I can use them to see different things), but how are other people's monitors set up? That's the question…
Special feature!:
I've added a new title page feature thingy to Pinky TA at the start of the comic HERE. It's sort of an intro for new readers (and old ones too!), so people can more easily get into the story and also have an overview. Plus, there are maps!
-Code for the latest version of the black and white templates are here.
Ozoneocean at 9:39AM, June 29, 2007
[b][u]Replies[/u][/b]:[b][/b] - [b]Man in Black[/b] - Ty man ^^ [b]Nepath[/b] - Thankyou so much Nepath! I love your avatar. [b]Legendkiller13[/b] - Thanks man, I try to make it something I like so others will too ^^ [b]Kalliikak[/b] - Thankyou Kall, the light behind the truck is the bit I'm most pleased with. [b]Vie4[/b] - Thanks man ^^ [b]Simonmackie[/b] - Thanks Simon, Ah, and to think once I never bothered with them, it's rewaring to experiment with shadow ^^ [b]Detectivefork[/b] - Thanks DF, She deserves to grow ^^ [b]Subcultured[/b] - Thanks Sub! Not as awesome as your amazing painterly stuff, but these are my efforst at it ^^ [b]Fugli[/b] - Thanks Fugli, I'm glad it appeals to you like that ^^ [b]jgib99[/b] - Ah, So the things I like, appeal to others as well! This is very good to know ^^ [b]Crazyduck[/b] - TY man ^^ [b]KAM[/b] - TY man ^_^ [b]Sarah[/b] - Thanks Sarah! Well the detail isn't too great so they weren't too taxing to do :D
Nepath at 8:18AM, June 26, 2007
Wow. Stunning comic. Don't know what's going on but definately going to read your archive.
legendkiller13 at 12:00PM, June 24, 2007
a whole lot of lovely goin on here!!!
kalliikak at 12:46AM, June 24, 2007
masterful attention to detail. and excellent lighting, exspecially in that first panel.
vie4 at 7:03PM, June 23, 2007
Nice art
simonmackie at 9:44AM, June 23, 2007
THe shadow work on this is terrific
DetectiveFork at 7:54AM, June 23, 2007
I like that you ventured your characters out to a different place.
subcultured at 8:28AM, June 22, 2007
awesome lighting on this page lots of shadows and dramatic angles
fugli at 7:36PM, June 21, 2007
Beautiful!
jgib99 at 9:02PM, June 20, 2007
Incredible work on this page. I especially liked the first panel. The coloring on the whole page is brilliant.
SarahN at 6:44PM, June 20, 2007
So...many...people...X_x... You have a lot of patience.
Ozoneocean at 5:13PM, June 20, 2007
[b][u]Replies[/u][/b]: [b]ChrisJ[/b] - Thanks so much Chris! Ah, it's something that was very strong in my mind's eye! [b]Hawk[/b] - Thanks Hawk! That's the panel that drove the whole page. I had a vision in my mind for that one and made the others around it. Alough I was originally only goung to leave the truck a black shadow I couldn't stop myself from putting in the detail. ^^ [b]Mylar[/b] - Thanks man ^^ [b]That Yellow Kid[/b] - Hahah, I don't actually like drawing Vehicles right now... :P They're a pain! Lireil of Badblood and Juno of Star crossed Destiny draw them better in my opinion! [b]Barb![/b] - Thanks so much Barb! I'm glad you like it, heh, it's not quite as lovely as one of your pages though ;) [b]Adobedragon[/b] - Thanks Adobe! Yeah, I never know how other people see my work...The the desert light! [b]Juno[/b] - Thanks Juno! That's the feeling I try for ^_^ [b]Bekefel[/b] - Hahaha, people always hope that... Go watch Thiller! :D [b]Simon[/b] - Hey thanks Simon. Heh, too bad they won't though, not being that kind of work... or is it? o_O hehehe, no. No, it not :) [b]FAL[/b] - Thanks so much FAL! Now if ony my initial drawings were as good as yours... [b]Aurora Moon[/b] - Thanks Aurora! Ah, lighting is a good too to play with! [b]Seanh[/b] - Thanks! I liked what I saw of your art too Seanh, you've got some good techniques for colour! [b]Hero[/b] - Ty man! ^^ [b]Tantz[/b] - Thanks Tantz! I'm glad that comes through. Personally I'm about 70% happy with the page, but I'm glad so many aspects communicated aso well and are so well recieved ^^ [b]Darwin[/b] - Thanks Darwin, Hahaha, as usual? Well not always ;) But I do try for consitancey, yes ^_^ [b]Silent Kitty[/b] - Ha! You're right, they've not a lot of space left on that crowded truck have that? ^_^ [b]Whirlywind[/b] - Wow, what a coincidence! I was just listening to Cream's "the white Room" and Jack Bruce was singing "the Shadows run from themselves" when I read your comment about the shadows! o_O [b]Ecchi Kitty[/b] - Glad to know it Kitty! That's a releif! Myabe the bright monitor is just set too bright afterall? [b]Nick[/b] - Ha! That first one seems to be a big success! ^_^ [b]Lothar[/b] - Hahahaha, it would if it was in Robo Bronto or mabe COMMING SOON! ^_^ Hahaha, wonderful idea though. If I could think like you my writing would be 10 times more interesting! [b]D0m[/b] - Thanks D0m, yeah, I try new stuff all the time, always glad when I imprive too! I'm always trying for faster, smoother art! CRTs give better colour and response time! [b]Madscott[/b] - Ha! Thanks Scott! Not as much as the guys from the Gigcast though! That's for sure!
chrisj at 4:45PM, June 20, 2007
Looks fine to me, first panel is particularly strong, with great desert light.
Hawk at 4:25PM, June 20, 2007
The contrast and composition of that first panel is excellent. Well, it ALL is, but I find that first panel especially striking.
that kid yellow at 4:08PM, June 20, 2007
you have to teach me how to draw vechials man
iowabarbidoll at 3:42PM, June 20, 2007
Beautiful page! ^_^ ~B
adobedragon at 3:16PM, June 20, 2007
Doesn't look washed out to me. The lighting is very apropos for a sunny, desert scene.
junoblairb at 2:23PM, June 20, 2007
I really love that first panel! And the carnage in the last panel is very subtle but quite epic. :D
Bekefel at 2:17PM, June 20, 2007
I hope they become zombies, I love zombies.
simonitro at 1:57PM, June 20, 2007
The different outdoor lightings are well done! The last panel is so done right that gives me the creeps and suspence of what's in there! Like a horror movie moment!
FAL at 12:28PM, June 20, 2007
Very nice page, my friend! The first panel is impressive. I love how you did the lighting and the shadows... it all looks just right!
Aurora Moon at 11:14AM, June 20, 2007
love the lighting in this page. =3
seanh at 10:23AM, June 20, 2007
Hot damn that's beautiful. Especially the vehicles!
Tantz_Aerine at 9:21AM, June 20, 2007
No, it looks quite well on my end. And I love the sequencing here, all the different angles in the panels. They show a haphazardness among a general whole which would be expected among soldiers picking through the bodies of their fellows. Very well done.
Darwin at 6:31AM, June 20, 2007
I love the first panel with the sun at their backs...it sets the mood of the page perfectly! Great work as usual!