Page 31
Ozoneocean on July 25, 2007
Page description:
More narration. The box is abandoned and so is the scene. They pack up and drive away, the tank crews are buried with other military dead, and Cc is like a bad smell back at command. She failed to rescue anybody except Pinky's crew, but they'd already rescued themselves.
Commentary:
I wanted to do this one quickly. It wasn't quick though… the little panels went fast but I kept making mistakes with the main panel! Why is it that rough drawings always look 1000 times better than stiff, traced-over finished pics? I dunno… I had to keep Killing the “finished” versions and go back to the rough one. What a pain! That's why this is late. I also had an unexpected work shift too, which slowed me.
News:
Pinky TA was Number 1 for Two weeks! Yay! I think the rankings are broken though…
Vote incentives:
This week's incentives are this page uncoloured in simple linework for BCX. The Vote incentive for TWC is the Really rough basic linework version so you can see what these pages are constructed from.
Feature
This week's featured comic is M Organ Art by MOrgan. Caution, this is an adult comic! M Organ Art is a sexy, cheeky naughty humour comic, currently involved in the Adult Phase of the Crossover Wars.
+Feature+ ———- +Fan Art!+
Fan Art!
Mistchiff of the truly amazing action manga that is Steel Staccato created this sexy futuristic Pinky as a reward for me being Number 1 at Drunk Duck. ^___^
SarahN at 12:15AM, July 26, 2007
DAMN that's a lot of graves, reminds me of the big one in Washington.
oneminutecomics at 12:07AM, July 26, 2007
nomatter how painfull it looks great ozone. Wow never saw a rough bg lke in panel one from you before ;P Awesome shit. And I'll keep pestering you untill you release this in printed form! I want a Pinky TA issue at home! That'sm an order Pinky! Hey! I have a new cat and I didnt have a name for her yet..should I call her ozone or Pinky? even though she's black... hmmmm
MOrgan at 11:00PM, July 25, 2007
Well, it's not really CC's fault the rescue failed, so why does she seem to be getting chewed out?
alejkhan at 10:58PM, July 25, 2007
What a great page! Such wonderful images and great pacing on the narration. Wonderful dialog too, very poignant. Even though it gave you trouble, this page turned out super impressive!
tea_green at 10:53PM, July 25, 2007
Aww, this is soo sad. The writing is amazing and it's just so deep. Awesome Job!
Tantz_Aerine at 10:49PM, July 25, 2007
Actually I think this is one of your best pages so far. It is tempting me to print it out and have it stuck somewhere near my work area (too bad kids would get the wrong idea with Pinky's shot in the big panel XD). Joking aside though, this is a pretty emotional page. The writing complements it excellently. Truly one of your best and most well balanced pages.
magicalmisfits at 10:38PM, July 25, 2007
And a bad day was had by all