I actually liked this page a lot for some odd reason. Rate, comment, vote, and enjoy. I have had so much on my mind today, it feels like my head is about to explode….literally
I couldn't think of anything else to do. The orginal Author and User Comments looked like shit to me, so I changed them. I'm getting better as you said. I try not to curse a lot in my comics as you do. Can you help me with the effects please? What do you mean by "mock ups of effects by more well known comics"?
VinceLikesRooster at 2:59PM, Oct. 19, 2008
I couldn't think of anything else to do. The orginal Author and User Comments looked like shit to me, so I changed them. I'm getting better as you said. I try not to curse a lot in my comics as you do. Can you help me with the effects please? What do you mean by "mock ups of effects by more well known comics"?
soonmme at 12:27PM, Oct. 19, 2008
You've gotten better since I last bothered critiquing you. :S However, your entire comic still seams to be a mash up of other people's styles. It's like you're trying to do kevin's pokéball effect(I dislike his, and then on top of that you're doing it wrong. :S), Recon's sound effects(with kevin's text but you're doing it too small so it also looks bad :s), my crude style of jokes(Which, in all honesty is waaaaaaaay overdone). And when you do anything like effects or whatnot they tend to look... icky(the spray effect on the last page), especially with the contrast of mock ups of effects by more well known comics.