Beautiful: page 12

Blitzkrieg1701 on July 5, 2009

Bug Dude! What are you doing?

See, this is where I realized that all the narration on the earlier pages was unnecessary. This pretty much tells itself without any inner monologue. Then again, I do kind of like the idea that his mind is racing when he's not really doing much, while actually taking ACTION seems to clear things up. Well, this is what happens when you constantly rewrite a comic as you go.