This is better. MUCH, MUCH BETTER. See? Didn't I tell you? But there is still room for improvement. You still have your grammar and spelling mistakes. Look over that, okay? Also, your zoom effects could use some work. Make sure you fix that, too. Btw, what program do you use?
This is a GREAT improvement bro. But remember, there is always room for more. :P
Loybok at 12:02PM, Jan. 29, 2011
Lol thanks and I used Paint.net....but where are my zoom problems?
PKNESS at 11:39AM, Jan. 29, 2011
This is better. MUCH, MUCH BETTER. See? Didn't I tell you? But there is still room for improvement. You still have your grammar and spelling mistakes. Look over that, okay? Also, your zoom effects could use some work. Make sure you fix that, too. Btw, what program do you use? This is a GREAT improvement bro. But remember, there is always room for more. :P
Loybok at 11:02AM, Jan. 29, 2011
O ok sorry I'll do better
king101 at 10:59AM, Jan. 29, 2011
NEVER EVER upload more then one page a day! And watch out for grammar and spelling because I see lots of mistakes!
king101 at 10:59AM, Jan. 29, 2011
NEVER EVER upload more then one page a day! And watch out for grammar and spelling because I see lots of mistakes!