about what brawllucas said
"I think I'll make a new Amy sprite for you. And a new Wally. I mean, if you want me to." i second that." i wouldnt mind making new characters for you (only if you want) but yea all you have to do is ask one of us then i guess
It's......okay, but it needs work. First, you should look up some tutorials on DD for better
text bubbles.
Secondly, you should get some fonts; make the comic more SHAZAM-like, y'know. I reccomend going to dafont.com; they have TONS of fonts. Pick some, try them out, etc. etc.
Thirdly, you have some punctuation errors. You don't put enough exclamation points when they're needed, just periods. That doesn't give the comic much excitement. For example, in the last page, when Wally was fighting that bully, a LOT of exclamation points were needed. I mean, you don't say, "Oh no Geodude."
You say, "Oh no, Geodude!"
Ummmmmm, I think that's it for now. Your effects are okay, for now, and just to help ya, I think I'll make a new Amy sprite for you. And a new Wally. I mean, if you want me to. Just PQ and send me the details. Good luck. ;D
Loybok at 6:34PM, Jan. 31, 2011
Hey thanks for the tip and I'll be sure to get back to you on the sprites
Supah Sonic at 2:01PM, Jan. 31, 2011
about what brawllucas said "I think I'll make a new Amy sprite for you. And a new Wally. I mean, if you want me to." i second that." i wouldnt mind making new characters for you (only if you want) but yea all you have to do is ask one of us then i guess
Brawllucas at 7:41AM, Jan. 31, 2011
It's......okay, but it needs work. First, you should look up some tutorials on DD for better text bubbles. Secondly, you should get some fonts; make the comic more SHAZAM-like, y'know. I reccomend going to dafont.com; they have TONS of fonts. Pick some, try them out, etc. etc. Thirdly, you have some punctuation errors. You don't put enough exclamation points when they're needed, just periods. That doesn't give the comic much excitement. For example, in the last page, when Wally was fighting that bully, a LOT of exclamation points were needed. I mean, you don't say, "Oh no Geodude." You say, "Oh no, Geodude!" Ummmmmm, I think that's it for now. Your effects are okay, for now, and just to help ya, I think I'll make a new Amy sprite for you. And a new Wally. I mean, if you want me to. Just PQ and send me the details. Good luck. ;D