Comic 5:Oh Great, a new Comic.
Glitch_Taromaki on Aug. 27, 2006
Glitch:So, this is our new format. Notice the font, word balloons, and Barry talking to himself again. And again. I got a new compy, which won't let me use teh old font, so I was kinda forced. Taromaki claims to of lost his sence of humor, but I think he's just being lazy.
Glitch_Taromaki at 7:49AM, Aug. 29, 2006
Actually, My idea is to have Barry be redundant. I mean he's already talking to himself, so I doubt he really cares what he's saying. I gotta get April in soon. Oh, right next next next strip.
Vagabond at 3:35PM, Aug. 28, 2006
He seems extraordinarily calm considering he's getting chased by a small animal... Also, you've used a "Well, (insert part)" too many times. It's starting to get redundant. Your comic most definitely has gotten shinier and more polished since your last update, but there's still a long way to go with the script and the dialogue. And really, that pretty much just comes down to "practice, practice, practice."