#24
sbnt on Dec. 17, 2009
there r alot of changes in this page.new fr/lg version of michael.new font.and new speech bubbles.
sbnt on Dec. 17, 2009
there r alot of changes in this page.new fr/lg version of michael.new font.and new speech bubbles.
DarkSpark at 6:47PM, Dec. 22, 2009
@brawl i was just mimicking kevin. its fun actually. lol
Brawllucas at 5:13PM, Dec. 19, 2009
pretty good man. the blonde hair isnt that bad. its not hurting my eyes from this point of view. the laura chick is shaded HORRIBLY in the third panel tho. but u seem that u got it down. good job.
DarkSpark at 6:59AM, Dec. 18, 2009
by the way the re-colors make my eyes burn.. some of them make no sense, n yes the new main character sprite is horrible.
DarkSpark at 6:58AM, Dec. 18, 2009
dude u dont need to do custom or recolors for every single person. n i think ur using anime ace, which is good. n i rly hope u r not gonna use thjose bubbles for wen we see character's speech. but pretty good
reddragon142 at 5:19AM, Dec. 18, 2009
men u really need to work on ur recolors, ur main character sprite is bad and the other blonde guy sprite is bad too, making blond guys is one of the most difficult recolors because almost everybody choose shiny colors as u did, I think the best for u is to ask someone to make it. and i like the new speech bubbles they look prety good and the font is better now too. dont think im being rude, im just trying to help u improving as lots of people tryied in my comic, because for now the only think i see u could really workon are the recolors so keep going. because of this im going to give u a 5 ^^
melvin2898 at 11:47PM, Dec. 17, 2009
Awesome update dude!I got a few tips.Maybe all the main characters of the comic should have custom sprites?The new main character rocks!The new bubbles are just awesome.Those sprites in the middle could have stayed in their orignal form and just been recolored over to save time.