OK. I'll work on slowing things down, but I already have 20+ pages uploaded. It'll take some time, but I'm willing to shoot for it. Some of the stuff you mentioned, I am working on, and others I'll need to revamp alot of pages. Be sure to check in for improvements :)
*yay for requested reviews! :D*
This comic has definite potential.
That being said it's a tad too clear that you are still new to comics.
The graphic, weird perspective and stuff is weird looking, but could be change with some minor tune ups.
The Bald guys overworld sprite is weird.
THe shirtless guy is shirtless... why?
All the custom sprites are mediocre, be it recolors or simple splices.
After the first few pages, the emotions disappear, they're fine on page one, but then they begin to decline.
The pace is too fast, already by nine pages the bad guy was discovered, had his plan stopped, and had his plans unstopped,think of it in a long scale, imagine at page 100, is the bad guy gonna have tried and failed +9000 times? and if your comic has a planned end, then it shouldn't come to soon just because of the fast pace.
Also the whole "IM OAK, HERE ARE POKEMON EVEN THOU IM A PROFESSIONAL TRAINED AT USING THEM, AND YOU JUST SOME KIDS, BUT HEY YOU CAN SAVE THE DAY" thing is ridiculous.
The Dialog is choppy at times.
The main characters lack personality.
The effects are weird, but getting good at those takes time.
That's all I seem to find to complain about. :) You're on your way, kid.
If you(or anyone else reading this) needs help with anything feel free to ask, contact info on profile. :D
BtSS at 6:28PM, April 10, 2009
Actually I'm gonna just restart AGAIN. I can't really change the story without doing so.
BtSS at 5:20PM, April 10, 2009
OK. I'll work on slowing things down, but I already have 20+ pages uploaded. It'll take some time, but I'm willing to shoot for it. Some of the stuff you mentioned, I am working on, and others I'll need to revamp alot of pages. Be sure to check in for improvements :)
soonmme at 3:52PM, April 10, 2009
*yay for requested reviews! :D* This comic has definite potential. That being said it's a tad too clear that you are still new to comics. The graphic, weird perspective and stuff is weird looking, but could be change with some minor tune ups. The Bald guys overworld sprite is weird. THe shirtless guy is shirtless... why? All the custom sprites are mediocre, be it recolors or simple splices. After the first few pages, the emotions disappear, they're fine on page one, but then they begin to decline. The pace is too fast, already by nine pages the bad guy was discovered, had his plan stopped, and had his plans unstopped,think of it in a long scale, imagine at page 100, is the bad guy gonna have tried and failed +9000 times? and if your comic has a planned end, then it shouldn't come to soon just because of the fast pace. Also the whole "IM OAK, HERE ARE POKEMON EVEN THOU IM A PROFESSIONAL TRAINED AT USING THEM, AND YOU JUST SOME KIDS, BUT HEY YOU CAN SAVE THE DAY" thing is ridiculous. The Dialog is choppy at times. The main characters lack personality. The effects are weird, but getting good at those takes time. That's all I seem to find to complain about. :) You're on your way, kid. If you(or anyone else reading this) needs help with anything feel free to ask, contact info on profile. :D
melvin2898 at 1:40PM, April 10, 2009
Awesome.I can't wait to the next game.
BtSS at 10:28AM, April 10, 2009
Well thanks then, lol
evanneo at 9:46AM, April 10, 2009
It wasn't. >.
BtSS at 6:16AM, April 10, 2009
I can't tell if that was sarcasm or not. oh well
evanneo at 10:08PM, April 9, 2009
WHAT A TWIST.