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HikariLi on Jan. 10, 2009
Okay, I probably fail horribly, but I wanted to take a crack at making a comic, mainly because the comic's I've read ownall. Anyways, this is just the title, don't kill me.
HikariLi on Jan. 10, 2009
Okay, I probably fail horribly, but I wanted to take a crack at making a comic, mainly because the comic's I've read ownall. Anyways, this is just the title, don't kill me.
KevinClifford at 1:29PM, Jan. 13, 2009
I wasn't talking about you, I was talking about the other people on that thar role playing forum =x
HikariLi at 7:52PM, Jan. 11, 2009
-coughs- I'm new, so yah.. -shifts her eyes- Sorry if I'm not as good as you experienced people?
KevinClifford at 7:41PM, Jan. 11, 2009
That's because they all use incorrectly shaded recolors there, more than likely =[
HikariLi at 5:41PM, Jan. 11, 2009
Rofl. Never had complaints on my Roleplay forums. xD.
soonmme at 5:09PM, Jan. 11, 2009
[quote=meeeeeee]Recolor'splices[/quote] A splice is two or more sprites thrown together. ;D
HikariLi at 4:43PM, Jan. 11, 2009
Oh, and I'm still using Gimp. x3;; I've gotten down the color editing and stuff. Oh, and, apparently, you didn't notice, the Main, isn't just the May sprite. It's something else. Notice the bandana? o.o
HikariLi at 4:15PM, Jan. 11, 2009
There's a plot, that's fer sure. And yes, I know the resizing is terrible. I'm really new at this. I'd love help xD Thank you for being very nice.
soonmme at 3:26PM, Jan. 11, 2009
Zee resizing is terrible. only resize with stretch and skew in increments of 100(resize and skew in vista :V), this type of title page is very cliché, try something more original next time. Recolor'splices are generally bad as main characters, if you can, try to get some better sprites. The colors for the text and what's behind it are very bright. Not terribly bad for a first comic.
SquishyNinja at 3:23PM, Jan. 11, 2009
I don't wanna be mean, I just wanna help. The title page doesn't really stand out. Is there some kind of hook in the story, something that will attract readers? Or is it just the same as every Pokemon game? It's a good start for a beginner.