Ok, it's good, and funny. Here are a couple of pointers to help.
1. Put the title on the actual page, not just in the dropdown menu. It looks a lot mor proffesional that way.
2. With the shocked eyes, a tiny black pixel in the middle gives a funnier effect.
Lukas Kirkby at 12:35AM, Oct. 7, 2007
Ok, it's good, and funny. Here are a couple of pointers to help. 1. Put the title on the actual page, not just in the dropdown menu. It looks a lot mor proffesional that way. 2. With the shocked eyes, a tiny black pixel in the middle gives a funnier effect.
Discet at 10:02PM, Oct. 6, 2007
0_0 mind reader ya nice
LilChrisJr at 9:21PM, Oct. 6, 2007
Put the crowd of people in prof. oaks office and he'll be out of pokémon...
Discet at 5:20PM, Oct. 6, 2007
thanks lilchris and put what in your comic
Discet at 5:18PM, Oct. 6, 2007
ok thanks
LilChrisJr at 5:12PM, Oct. 6, 2007
You should try to make them say different things and nice idea, I was gonna put something like that in my comic too.
ManaBlitz at 3:34PM, Oct. 6, 2007
I don't think it needs editing, I can't think of how to improve it anymore than it is right now.