Team Rockets lecture pg-11
DARKNES on July 15, 2009
zt2maniac thank you so much! Much much credit given! =D
So I am so excited that i'm using Jessie and James in my comic and meowth!
OMG Misty is coming to the comic, hey who knows if I get good feed back she might become a major character!
psychic master at 12:07PM, Aug. 1, 2009
Anime Pics! ^.^
anonymous at 10:41AM, July 18, 2009
The reason most of those aren't affected is likely related to the fact that they don't fall asleep. Any good pokebiologist could see that.
DARKNES at 3:39AM, July 18, 2009
[i] [b] He will be there soon lol [/b] [/i]
Awseomness at 9:46PM, July 16, 2009
MAKE MISTY A MAJOR CHARACTER! I also must wonder where my cameo is at the moment. Although I can assume he'll turn up eventually. I'm just sorry he'll miss the lesson.
DARKNES at 10:12AM, July 16, 2009
[i] [b] I know where ye are coming from guys but I'm only using a simple program. But thanks fot the advice! [/b] [/i]
Xerinos at 9:49AM, July 16, 2009
I feel this comic could use some improvement. 1)The borders on the text bubbles are far too thick. It just doesn't look good. 2) Final panel. I don't really like the Pokéball effect, but sometimes it just can't be helped, lack of program, etc- 3) I like the maps, you did a good job there, and the red eye effect on the Pokémon is simple, well done, and effective. 4) Scenes from the anime. I do this in my comic too, but be sure not to overuse it. 5) Spell check. Always, always, always. I hate when I forget to do this. But in second panel, The is missing an e. Unless you meant it to be some strange slang The. 6)Yellow on Blue. Iiick. Sorry if I came across as harsh. Honest review ;D
poonipoonz at 9:42AM, July 16, 2009
Darknes you've got a lot of work that you could do to make this comic better. But don't worry, I can help. :) Feel free to pq me if you need some and some tips, and even a crit. :D
DARKNES at 4:53AM, July 16, 2009
[i] [b] I totaly get what you mean but I just needed to establish the story. Thanks for the help! [/i] [/b]
cheesen8or at 4:27AM, July 16, 2009
umm your comic needs to slow down a bit, it should take 3 pages to get to mt moon from cerulean if you add some more little things it will me good
DARKNES at 3:12AM, July 16, 2009
[i] [b] Hey your welcome lol! [/b] [/i]
zt2maniac at 10:32PM, July 15, 2009
YAH CREDIT.