DarkSpark at 1:04AM, Sept. 23, 2009

and why r u complaining about that on my comic. go spam someone elses's, sbnt?

Sandman at 11:20PM, Sept. 22, 2009

I didn't say that comment about fire pokemon stop accusing me about that stupid comment sbnt, I have nothing against fire pokemon ( I used to though), except that stupid monkey one, so it wasn't me.

Sandman at 11:19PM, Sept. 22, 2009

I didn't say that comment about fire pokemon stop accusing me about that stupid comment sbnt, I have nothing against fire pokemon ( I used to though), except that stupid monkey one, so it wasn't me.

sbnt at 6:53PM, Sept. 21, 2009

i no sandman wrote that fire pokemon comment

DarkSpark at 8:29AM, Sept. 20, 2009

thx

PKNESS at 8:03AM, Sept. 20, 2009

FRICKIN AWESOME.

DarkSpark at 7:18AM, Sept. 20, 2009

thx vegitox. i'll try to get into the character development right away. i'll probably use ur suck line in the nxt issue. might not update tommorow

xVegitox at 7:12AM, Sept. 20, 2009

Its a good start, but there's no depth in this. I mean, you already chose how they get their pokemon, not one of the better choice but thats your own decision. But how about giving these guys some character. They all hand in their forms at the same time. No one says the options suck or someting? Like do something so we get to like, connect to a character. You need to work on your character developement, or else you'll walk into a generic path my friend... But atleast you can do text bubbles and effects I'll give you that. =)

DarkSpark at 6:58AM, Sept. 20, 2009

there is a mistake in the 2nd panel. sam's line shud be "Well we better fil these out now i suppose"