Arc at 6:39AM, Dec. 30, 2010

There's a lot of problems with this strip. Your lack of bubbles suggests laziness to me as it givesoff the impresion that you focus on getting these pages out rather than making sure that each one is of high quality. There is a lack of variety in what the characters are wearing. Some of the sprites are also not properly shaded and for some reason some of them are unneccesarily blurred. The drop shadow is not only too dark but it is also way too big so try and get that sorted. You've also got a program than paint but you still make rather poor speech bubbles and that'd still be the case even if they were made in Paint. Try to read up on a few tutorials to try and make them look more professsional. The tails in paticular are pretty bad. The guy with the red hat in the first panel's sprite looks pretty messed up too. Nothing really jumps out at me that makes me find it too entertaining either. I hope you'll take these suggestions to heart so you can improve your skills to become a better comicer. I wish you good luck with the rest of the comic. :D

Shadow Dinosaur at 2:17AM, Dec. 30, 2010

Hmmm I smell cameos too. :)

Supah Sonic at 10:13PM, Dec. 29, 2010

i smell cameos....