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Page 326- Rental Pokemon

exxxtasy69 on Dec. 30, 2010

Okay, folks last page of this year!! I know I didn't get a chance to progress as much with this story as I did last year but life got in the way if you didn't know. But hopefully, things will get a lot better in the new year as I definitely wanna continue on!! I got big plans for the edge in the works so keep an eye out!! ;)

As for this page, most of the participants get their rental Pokemon. We'll get into the actual tourney in the new year obviously. So stay tuned.

Otherwise, a BIG thanks to everyone who has even stopped by to look at my comic. I thank you all for all of your views, comments, and ratings as it has really kept me motivated to keep going. I also really wanna thank yall for bearing with me with patience when I was M.I.A! It's gonna be a while to get the edge back up to where it was but I hope yall are still here with me in the long run as time goes on. So everyone have a good time on New Year's and I hope to see you all in the New Year!! Thanks for everything, stay safe, and most of all…..

HAPPY NEW YEAR'S, BEEEEEOOOOTTTTTCCCCHHHEEEESSSSSS!!!! =D

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Arc at 1:35PM, Dec. 31, 2010

[Quote=Arc]There's a lot of problems with this strip. Your lack of bubbles suggests laziness to me as it givesoff the impresion that you focus on getting these pages out rather than making sure that each one is of high quality. There is a lack of variety in what the characters are wearing. Some of the sprites are also not properly shaded and for some reason some of them are unneccesarily blurred. The drop shadow is not only too dark but it is also way too big so try and get that sorted. You've also got a program than paint but you still make rather poor speech bubbles and that'd still be the case even if they were made in Paint. Try to read up on a few tutorials to try and make them look more professsional. The tails in paticular are pretty bad. The guy with the red hat in the first panel's sprite looks pretty messed up too. Nothing really jumps out at me that makes me find it too entertaining either. I hope you'll take these suggestions to heart so you can improve your skills to become a better comicer. I wish you good luck with the rest of the comic. :D[/Quote] It'd be good to listen to criticism by the way. ;P Also, your panels seem to be too be too small. Try to make them bigger in your next strip.

DracheLehre at 11:37PM, Dec. 30, 2010

HIro: Aw hell yeah! Effing Rhyperior!!

OmegaProtoman at 10:51PM, Dec. 30, 2010

Karen: Oh cool an Arceus!