#4 A Rivalry Ignites!
RamenTime on July 6, 2010
Ok, here is my first comic that was made on Paint.NET. I know there are alot of mistakes in it but I will try to improve on them. (The bottom thing looks really ugly, I was going for a clashy effect)
Anyways, in this comic we introduce ???. Enjoy!
Grim_the_Hedgehog at 9:52AM, Aug. 20, 2010
word bubbles are ALOT better!
ozzy1181 at 11:52AM, July 6, 2010
So who gets the weed?
spitman56 at 11:25AM, July 6, 2010
love Oak's face in 9th panel
RamenTime at 9:54AM, July 6, 2010
@PKNESS I'm more of a circle text bubble guy. And yeah, my Pokemon sprites are kinda...large. :p
PKNESS at 9:34AM, July 6, 2010
I like this, but you should ask happymouse to use his text bubbles he made. :D
reddragon142 at 8:46AM, July 6, 2010
you're making the pokemon too big, oddish, elekid and ralts are smaller than humans, the rest is pretty good
happymouse at 8:45AM, July 6, 2010
ehh, try looking back at my comment a few pages ago, if this is the good one, that comment will be very helpfull, but the textbubbles are cool, i have to admit, oh and, the elekid is like double as big as the trainers, i think that has to be fixed.