Rich at 6:12PM, Sept. 15, 2006

Teh good - The text is readable. - No bit mixing. Teh bad - Teh text is tiny. - Narration sucks when done poorly like this. It cuts down on stuff that could be used for character development. Teh ugly - Why is the page so goddamned tiny?!?! - Grammar teh quality bad really is! - typos!

mudkip53 at 1:50PM, Sept. 15, 2006

Your comic are great,

jef dam5 at 4:08AM, Sept. 15, 2006

And ''prologe'' is spelled prologue if i'm correct.

KevinClifford at 1:12PM, Sept. 13, 2006

Tell him his spelling sucks... And I suspect your friend's name is "Stefanos" ... If so, tell him I said "Thanks for stealing my cliche."

jef dam5 at 7:33AM, Sept. 13, 2006

What he says, aside from the fact it isn't bad. Because it is. This would come so much more handier if it were more-then-one-pages. Tell your ''mate'' to come and register at drunkduck himself, rather then letting you, who owns responsibility for the comic, post it on a comic that isn't even yours.

will123 at 4:26AM, Sept. 13, 2006

well can ya tell your friend to resize the characters (i am not saying it is bad) i say resize because the egg is as big as the human

soniccomicwriter at 12:02AM, Sept. 13, 2006

ma mate has done like 15 pages allready but i dnt think i should put them all up in one day so i am doing it in order from monday wednesday and friday

soniccomicwriter at 12:02AM, Sept. 13, 2006

ma mate has done like 15 pages allready but i dnt think i should put them all up in one day so i am doing it in order from monday wednesday and friday