I gotta hand it to qijun, he had the guts to say the things about this that I didn't.
I agree with everything he said except the thing about giving you a 5. If I were to reward this abysmal performance with positive reinforcement, then you would never learn.
Honestly though, just try to improve things graphically first. Improvement in story quality should follow. But above all, I want to see you start taking some PRIDE in your work.
Your comic is sooooo clinchey,that text is awful and u have noo emotion, i can't belive this comic took my old comic's place in the most read section....
You get a 5 cos i don't want u to feel bad
TBustah at 10:32PM, Aug. 25, 2008
I gotta hand it to qijun, he had the guts to say the things about this that I didn't. I agree with everything he said except the thing about giving you a 5. If I were to reward this abysmal performance with positive reinforcement, then you would never learn. Honestly though, just try to improve things graphically first. Improvement in story quality should follow. But above all, I want to see you start taking some PRIDE in your work.
Sonku at 12:54PM, July 19, 2007
why is this guy hatin on me cause i took his spot and i get a 5 cause u kno its good and how is it cliche
qijun at 11:03PM, July 18, 2007
Your comic is sooooo clinchey,that text is awful and u have noo emotion, i can't belive this comic took my old comic's place in the most read section.... You get a 5 cos i don't want u to feel bad