#01
selkielili on Oct. 22, 2010
Thankyou to those who commented on the last pages, I'm gonna redo the front cover at one point but for now I'll focus on the story getting going otherwise I'll forget what's supossed to be happening ^^;
If anyone does have any tips for me I'm ready to listen, it's been so long since I last made a sprite comic so I'm really rusty at it
EDIT: Thankyou to xVegitox for pointing out my mistakes in the speech ^^. I've redone this page because, well I thought it might look better this way and I think I've finally worked out how I'm doing my panels.
xVegitox at 5:26AM, Oct. 23, 2010
Pretty good I think they're few punctuation issues. Panel 1 should be "Urgh! Why ME?!" same with panel 2, it needs a question mark. Not bad though. Keep it up.