Pokemon Sinnoh Surfer

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#3 Chapter One Page Two

Walrus on Oct. 12, 2007

I'm on a roll today! Three pages in on day! Many of you are surprised and happy to see the comic is finally down to a acceptable size. I will eventually edit the old pages and to make this comic what I was hoping and dreaming for. Sorry for making this kinda wordy… Please no offensive comments they will be reported.

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globep at 3:44AM, March 19, 2010

nice , needs to be polished a bit .

maskedmonkey at 6:31AM, Oct. 14, 2007

your comic is on a roll its almost in top 1,000 comics!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lukas Kirkby at 5:23AM, Oct. 14, 2007

yeah, this looks kind of cool. But when you scan it up, rub out the black speckly bits, and it will look a lot tidier.

Chaz McRich at 11:35PM, Oct. 13, 2007

Quite fine, but it could be better.

MysteriousJeff at 7:00PM, Oct. 13, 2007

Well, the picture is very grainy. It doesn't look, um, clean and polished, like a comic should be. I'm glad you decided to draw the comic instead of spriting it, but drawn pokemon comics have been quickly rising in numbers, so you HAVE to stand out by doing things such as having a VERY unique story, update often, make it look as professional as possible. Otherwise, you've got a good thing started, but let's see if you can keep that good thing going.

Walrus at 5:56PM, Oct. 13, 2007

The second panel is the entrance to Lake Verity. Hope that helps. xP

Jules at 5:41PM, Oct. 13, 2007

Yeah, great speech bubbles. I'm not sure what's going on in panel two but good page anyway.

Zippo Prower at 4:38PM, Oct. 13, 2007

Nope, I'm still lost. Maybe cuz I'm not a big Pokemaniac.

Rutger at 4:26PM, Oct. 13, 2007

At least you got the speechballoons down. A for effort though!

Walrus at 3:59PM, Oct. 13, 2007

Let me redirect you to a page thats called: Page One.

Zippo Prower at 3:50PM, Oct. 13, 2007

No offense, but I have no idea what's going on.