KevinClifford at 9:58AM, Aug. 23, 2007

C'mon, if you don't fix it, you are disrespecting every spriter in existence, plus people don't like reading comics were "I" is spelled wrong. Honestly, I'm just trying to help you for when people who actually rate come along and rate you ones :O Not to mention, you're food fodder for all of the anti-spriters out there :O

brandonxkibble at 6:39PM, Aug. 22, 2007

well, im sorry? it wouldnt make sense to say im in for the lose cos i am not competing in anything. i mixed both sprites because i wanted to put my ideas to work and this is my first draft. i thought they meshed good together, i wouldnt see why anyone would care, i though it came out excellent and more unique. i dont need a grammar lesson because i know how to spell, if im not working in school ,then to me it wouldnt matter. .thanks for the tips though, i think ill keep the comic in its existing form.

KevinClifford at 4:05PM, Aug. 22, 2007

Dude, no. Do not put DP sprites on FRLG backgrounds. Nor should you put FRLG sprite on DP backgrounds (Even though those don't exist...) Because that's bit mixing, and bit-mixing is awful. Either somehow make all these backgrounds into DP style, and make the Ashley sprite DP also, or make the DP sprites into FRLG style. Or stop using DP sprites, that's probably the easiest idea rite der. What's with the "Chapter" bit in the corner? All it says is "CHAPTER:", there's like nothing after it... D; The text needs to to stay inside the text boxes, so don't use premade boxes. Make them yourself, it's not that hard. You lack capitalization and punctuation. Anything that begins a sentence needs to be capitalized, the word "I" needs to be capitalized, a person's name needs to be capitalized. And don't forget apostrophes! Without those, you are for the lose!