Dark Wolf 4 at 2:43PM, Sept. 21, 2010

Someone's in denial~

Dutchguy at 6:52AM, April 15, 2010

Just keep it,I am sure you will get better with practice( easy to say for someone who hasn't sprited before). Besides I have seen worse sprites

ozzy1181 at 3:32PM, Feb. 1, 2010

Fair enough, though im not a spriter... im a media student, im used to working with actual filmed meterial... anyway, this is much better than my original attemt (t-sproductions.piczo.com)

XM0stLyGhOstLyX at 2:39PM, Feb. 1, 2010

Hmm... I do understand what you mean, but, even tho you're focusing on the story, you should still try to make it look good too, because thats what gets readers, you DO want readers dont you? Because thats what makes people want to read your comic, because if you dont care what people think, no-one is going to read your comic, and if you have no readers, whats the point of making them? But I also mind you, just because someone says "I dont like this" or "that part sucks" doesn't mean you have to change it, just keep an open mind, thats all I ask.

ozzy1181 at 2:16PM, Feb. 1, 2010

I dont make it so it looks perfect, i write it for the storyline... if i could have i would have made it a live action... same with my USB comic... but thanks for being honest

XM0stLyGhOstLyX at 2:15PM, Feb. 1, 2010

Also, It kinda looks like Shaun's head is cut off, look at his neck :/ And the chick in the 2nd panel's hair is cut-off. AND the guy in the green shirt has NO emotions in any of the panels, its just all the same face every panel. *Sorry for all the comments, its just the more I look at this page the more I see things wrong with it.

XM0stLyGhOstLyX at 2:08PM, Feb. 1, 2010

That and shading could use some work...

XM0stLyGhOstLyX at 2:02PM, Feb. 1, 2010

The word boxes could use some work, and you might want to make the panels bigger, because the person sticking out of the the box takes up too much space. But... I'm in a good mood, so I'll give a 5.