The Devvy part does seem random like Altune said on the page ahead. If this actually happened in real life it'd happen more like this.
Ash:Who are you?
Devvy:I'm Devvy.
Ash:Are you on an adventure?
Devvy:Yes? Why do you need to know?
Ash:Wanna come with me?
Devvy:What?
Ash:LETS GO! *draggs him off*
Devvy:AAAH! SOMEONE HELP ME!
...yeah... people don't just become instant friends like that, it happens over a period of time.
ChrisTH at 6:45PM, May 3, 2009
ya what zoom said and fix your grammer up
Zoom the Hedgehog at 7:46PM, May 2, 2009
The Devvy part does seem random like Altune said on the page ahead. If this actually happened in real life it'd happen more like this. Ash:Who are you? Devvy:I'm Devvy. Ash:Are you on an adventure? Devvy:Yes? Why do you need to know? Ash:Wanna come with me? Devvy:What? Ash:LETS GO! *draggs him off* Devvy:AAAH! SOMEONE HELP ME! ...yeah... people don't just become instant friends like that, it happens over a period of time.
Devvy at 6:58PM, April 30, 2009
yeah the person who speaks first should have their bubbles above the person who talks after him, also yay im in the comic ^^
xVegitox at 6:50PM, April 30, 2009
Not bad, only thing fix up your text bubbles they a bit messy. Keep it up you'll get the hang of it.