Chapter 1 Page 9
Hapoppo on April 21, 2021
I'M NOT REUSING ESTABLISHING SHOTS YOU'RE REUSING ESTABLISHING SHOTS.
So this sequence wasn't originally what I had planned, I wanted to use it to introduce two other characters that'll be coming up soon, but the scene just wasn't working out so I decided to scrap it. This current scene popped into my head as a set up for sort of a B-plot I already have planned later on, and it just worked so much better.
Xade at 4:38PM, April 27, 2021
I've been there while writing my books. You got to brainstorm and tweak tweak tweak!
Xade at 3:37PM, April 21, 2021
yeh it works good
Hapoppo at 6:56AM, April 26, 2021
Thanks! Yeah, the original really fell flat... it's always nice when a better idea sneaks its way in.