FE: Prologue 1
rillystar on Feb. 21, 2006
Thanks for all the previous comments everyone. I'm glad one or two people recognized my chapter one cover XD
Anyhoo this page is actually one I really should redo…Elijah and Ira are really too hard to tell apart…maybe i should just shade in Elijah's hair lol. Anyhoo going to try and get up most of the old pages asap so I can start up work on the new ones and actually progress the story.
AdHocFerox at 1:59AM, Feb. 23, 2006
awesome opening
IronWolf at 6:23AM, Feb. 22, 2006
Heh. Normal is something that never quite happens. Strong introduction here.
Emotional at 9:08PM, Feb. 21, 2006
Awsome style, and I [b]Love[/b] your writing style. Keep up the good work rillystar.