LAST UPDATE FOR TONIGHT. Because page cushions are for sissies. xD …uuuugh the hands are awful… But I like the third panel. Apologies for handwriting again.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it.
Oh gracious, my iffy handwriting... I am currently trying to get my scanner and my photoshop software to hopefully make up with eachother and allow me to input some text decently over my writing, after which I'm hoping I can change these pages out. I definitely don't have the prettiest penmanship. In fact, I am slightly frightened by it.
Once again, thank you! I truly appreciate any comments to fine-tune things while I can.
Interested to see where this storyline goes.
Avoiding digital cleanup and staying true to your traditional media is very doable. It is working well for the mood of your comic. But you might want to consider going digital for the text. Handwriting can be iffy at times.
So far the handwriting on a few of these pages has been difficult to read - enough to make the pace of the pages thrown off (because I've had to stop and reread some words until I understand them).
The artwork is fantastic, and very fitting to the story so far.
Keep up the good work! Faved.
licialove at 9:02PM, April 28, 2011
I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PAGES! I am rather excited to see what all happens next I love mature Tom&&Drunken Bryce
Mesai_Taki at 8:23PM, April 28, 2011
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it. Oh gracious, my iffy handwriting... I am currently trying to get my scanner and my photoshop software to hopefully make up with eachother and allow me to input some text decently over my writing, after which I'm hoping I can change these pages out. I definitely don't have the prettiest penmanship. In fact, I am slightly frightened by it. Once again, thank you! I truly appreciate any comments to fine-tune things while I can.
Ally Haert at 5:53PM, April 28, 2011
Interested to see where this storyline goes. Avoiding digital cleanup and staying true to your traditional media is very doable. It is working well for the mood of your comic. But you might want to consider going digital for the text. Handwriting can be iffy at times. So far the handwriting on a few of these pages has been difficult to read - enough to make the pace of the pages thrown off (because I've had to stop and reread some words until I understand them). The artwork is fantastic, and very fitting to the story so far. Keep up the good work! Faved.