Well things are not going so well for our heroes! The bad guys can't win this one it's on Olympus, right?! You'll have tune in on the next update! It may not be tomorrow if there's not enough comments and views. Also I may be real busy, so hope you enjoy this!
Oh don't worry I won't hold back if I have time. I just was saying it would be more incentive to update tomorrow if I'm busy, which I will be. Thanks for everyone who came so far though. Oh and Shaneronzio, your right Neptune does control and manipulate the ocean. If you read the whole story so far you would have heard them mention on this day Neptune is only half as powerful. This and some other holes is why I may do this book over. Originaly I had Neptune going to the ocean depths to strenghen these magical bonds of a real bad beast. After doing so his power would be halved for a period of time. He comes to Olympus to use a meditation chamber to speed up the recovery process. I didn't put all that stuff in the story becuase it seems like the story would move to slow. I still had make how the bad guys was planing to assualt Olympus, and just wanted to get right into it and explain stuff on the way. I'll see if that was a wise choice. Also since Neptune isn't near the ocean his attacks also take alittle hit. He has no ocean to manipulate on Olympus and there for, must draw on his own water laser/energy powers.You may want to check character profiles in the near future to know just how powerful some people are and how there powers work.
Why is Neptune holding back?
I mean...HE CONTROLS THE OCEAN!
He could clean house.
maybe I missed something.
I will read the archives tonite.
Good Stuff!
Ohh a biting scenes...O.O...
But it's kinda sad seeing Neptune in a weak state, while seeing Artemis watches.
I like the differently drawn snake movements on this page, Medusa is a very unique monster of myth, and for her to be able to show a bit of emotion...
(even though she may look as if she doesn't care?), but why is it she doesn't look so convinced, about involving herself in the act of attack.
I like how you created a different outlook on the characters reactions, you don't know their own true intention.
Awesome page updates Antionestrife , I admire your drawn scenes of action, and coloring in vivid colors.
Your characters physical & facial emotions speak for itself, as it does have to bring the idea.that they think on a deeper level.
(A sense of conscious)..
Lovely update!
Btw: I noticed about the comments too, but I wasn't on much for the past two days.. sorry about that...I was only going on and off, and I was doing other things outside the computer..
Sorry I missed a update...~__~
Antionestrife I hope you have a good day, & take care..
And i hope you get more comments, cause you put a lot of time into these pages..
~Angel hugs~
~M~ v~~~~v
rana at 4:57PM, Feb. 9, 2007
Medusa is honorable? who woulda thunk? did you update twice? how did i miss this page?O.O ~promises to be more vigilant~
Nktakumi at 5:34AM, Feb. 9, 2007
Heh, You're worth of your Mature rating =p
lothar at 3:59AM, Feb. 9, 2007
this looks cool ! favd !
shaneronzio at 12:18AM, Feb. 9, 2007
My bad. cool story!
shino at 11:02PM, Feb. 8, 2007
OHHHHHHHHHhhhhh there at it again hahah this is some good stuff >.
Priceman at 10:03PM, Feb. 8, 2007
Whoa, Medusa has honor? Go figure.
Antionestrife at 6:35PM, Feb. 8, 2007
Oh don't worry I won't hold back if I have time. I just was saying it would be more incentive to update tomorrow if I'm busy, which I will be. Thanks for everyone who came so far though. Oh and Shaneronzio, your right Neptune does control and manipulate the ocean. If you read the whole story so far you would have heard them mention on this day Neptune is only half as powerful. This and some other holes is why I may do this book over. Originaly I had Neptune going to the ocean depths to strenghen these magical bonds of a real bad beast. After doing so his power would be halved for a period of time. He comes to Olympus to use a meditation chamber to speed up the recovery process. I didn't put all that stuff in the story becuase it seems like the story would move to slow. I still had make how the bad guys was planing to assualt Olympus, and just wanted to get right into it and explain stuff on the way. I'll see if that was a wise choice. Also since Neptune isn't near the ocean his attacks also take alittle hit. He has no ocean to manipulate on Olympus and there for, must draw on his own water laser/energy powers.You may want to check character profiles in the near future to know just how powerful some people are and how there powers work.
shaneronzio at 2:15PM, Feb. 8, 2007
Why is Neptune holding back? I mean...HE CONTROLS THE OCEAN! He could clean house. maybe I missed something. I will read the archives tonite. Good Stuff!
Nigellashade at 1:34PM, Feb. 8, 2007
Ohh a biting scenes...O.O... But it's kinda sad seeing Neptune in a weak state, while seeing Artemis watches. I like the differently drawn snake movements on this page, Medusa is a very unique monster of myth, and for her to be able to show a bit of emotion... (even though she may look as if she doesn't care?), but why is it she doesn't look so convinced, about involving herself in the act of attack. I like how you created a different outlook on the characters reactions, you don't know their own true intention. Awesome page updates Antionestrife , I admire your drawn scenes of action, and coloring in vivid colors. Your characters physical & facial emotions speak for itself, as it does have to bring the idea.that they think on a deeper level. (A sense of conscious).. Lovely update! Btw: I noticed about the comments too, but I wasn't on much for the past two days.. sorry about that...I was only going on and off, and I was doing other things outside the computer.. Sorry I missed a update...~__~ Antionestrife I hope you have a good day, & take care.. And i hope you get more comments, cause you put a lot of time into these pages.. ~Angel hugs~ ~M~ v~~~~v
Peipei at 12:59PM, Feb. 8, 2007
Oh dear >< They're gonna finish him off like this? Good luck Neptune :s