[001] Creation
barry_everard on Oct. 17, 2007
Hello all!
So it's My first page… yes it's a bit bland, and there's no real ‘art’ involved. But it's only meant to be a teaser, just to let you know that ‘yes’ I am working on a comic and not just coming in here critising others with no effort of My own.
So as far as this one goes, does it make you want to know more? Does it draw you in? Or does it just make you go ‘Meh’ and move on. More to follow as soon as I have the primary character's design down properly.
Amelius at 2:20AM, Nov. 14, 2007
YAY first page! Hey, as far as text-only intros go, I think it gets the job done! I do want to know more, and I think you made a nice stylistic choice here to establish the mood. Most text intros would make me move one to something else but for obvious reasons, this just works. I can't wait to see what you come up with for the character's design.