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kaiyaweird on April 28, 2009
I have a question for the readers! I want your opinion on the pacing. Is Redeeming Fate too slow? Too fast? Just right? Please let me know whatcha think. And if you have any harsh criticisms, please be gentle. (eeep!)^ ^
floodgatemartyr: I don't know what a real one looks like, but I got this from a photo of a Halloween costume which probably based its design off stereotypes. Really the only purpose of a fake gypsy outfit is to show part of Dradvia's personality. She's a real gysy herself, but she doesn't care.
Emilia21:Thanks!!! welcome to the party tomodachi-chan.
tommym: late is cool, I love hearing your thoughts. ^ ^ haha, thanks. She was too embarrassed to reply to that. you never know what will happen, heh heh.
amanda: I think it would be fun to wear. =3
KitKatMuffin: thanks ^ ^
Ashveira: thanks! I think it would still be fun to wear.
simonitro at 12:32AM, June 1, 2009
She looks cute in that gypsy dress!
tommym at 8:17AM, May 7, 2009
Dear Kaiya, She makes such a beautiful hostess.I would get my fortune read just to speak with Astria.I feel your pace is good.It's realy up to you.I would guess you don't want to rush your art. Tommym
floodgatemartyr at 11:42PM, May 5, 2009
I'll be honest, I've missed a few pages, so I can't really comment on the pacing right now. I've been working a ridiculous amount lately. I promise I'll catch up this weekend and let you know though. It's certainly looking good!
Avie at 7:14PM, April 30, 2009
There is nothing wrong with the pace in my opinion. It's moderate. Fast pace= You will get plenty of readers but you end up losing their interest once things get boring. Slow pace= Sometimes readers give up on a good comic because of it. It's unfortunate. Moderate pace= Justtt right. Readers will be beckoned to see what happens next and have more patience. It's all about the writing and where you want to go with the story at a certain point. Great comic so far !
Aghammer at 8:47PM, April 29, 2009
Um, yep, that outfit would bring in more business! This is a beautiful page my friend. I really like that third panel... Pacing is good although I'm afraid I missed a page somehow (will look in a sec)... I haven't thought about the pacing in your story so that tells me it's good. ;)
sufer009 at 12:32PM, April 29, 2009
Pretty! Youre doin just fine if ya ask me...its moving along quite nicely.
amanda at 9:26AM, April 29, 2009
You update frequently enough to justify having down-time in your story. Plus, I have a feeling that RF needs to establish some background information before the story really takes off. No worries - you're doing just fine!
KitKatMuffin at 6:58AM, April 29, 2009
Ohhh. very good acting skills.