Ch.2 page 16
kaiyaweird on June 15, 2009
The darkest page of RF yet. That is not an activity you should be doing in a short skirt, but lucky for Astria the wind is blowing in a convenient direction. Which I didn't actually plan, but it means you guys don't get a panty shot if you wanted one. XD
And in other news I hate grave stones. And bricks.
@theorah: Aw, thanks. ^ ^ That makes me happy.
@tommym: Thank you! That's what I was going for with the sky and I think it came out pretty good. I seem to be experimenting with perspective in these graveyard pages.
It's nice.
Haha, it would if the dead had emotions. thanks. ^ ^
@amanda: haha, thanks. and thanks for telling me how to put up the banner, but I have no idea to put it in the html. Someday (hopefully soon) I want to take a web scripting class.
@Ashveira: They're uber fun. ;D
@KitKatMuffin: Happy Birthday! (in case you didn't see where I said it on the last page)^_^
Aghammer at 9:13PM, June 16, 2009
Very nice and I would definitely jump a wall into a graveyard to get my check (or a buck). :D Hey, she has a magic skirt!! All of my characters wear those ;) [URL=http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MagicSkirt]MAGIC![/url]
tommym at 8:40PM, June 16, 2009
Dear Kaiya, Really good brick work,puts nice touch to the background.Your so good at drawing Astria,first panel for instance, pleats, knee highs,hair, face,fingers, overall shape of her body,every thing!Grave yard looks surreal,with those angles.The tombstone where the check landed, wonder who it belongs to. P.S. As the artist you are master of the wind and how it blows or doesn't blow Astria's short skirt.Thanks for reminding us of what we did not see.LOL Great page. Tommym Tommym
CZweig at 8:13PM, June 16, 2009
Well this doesn't seem like a very good place to be at all! Love your art on this page, the ominous feeling is really strong :D
Ashveira at 12:33PM, June 16, 2009
what an ominous place... I like it
amanda at 8:13AM, June 16, 2009
Awesome first panel! I'm glad I was spared the panty shot - not really my style, you know? XD I'll PQ you about the header image/html stuff.
Discet at 1:53AM, June 16, 2009
Great comic I love how the story is shaping to be. It is wierd but as long as you planned it all out I'm sure it will be great!