Chapter 1 - Page 10
Redemption on May 12, 2007
Introducing Evans. There is a reason why that young man is hanging outside the window - and its not only because I think that's funny. Cliffton is situated on the coast, near to a large penguin colony. The birds sometimes wander into town.
Who's Barlow?
Penguins, two point perspective and sound effects. This is by far my favourite page. :D
tammster at 9:08AM, March 2, 2010
The top panel is awesome. I love those cute pinguins.
Redemption at 2:58PM, May 31, 2007
^^ Wow - thank you! I guess its because I compare myself to comics with amazing artwork like Inverloch, Edepth Angel, Ethos, Hero by Knight and so on. I know I'm not at that level yet, but I'm hoping to improve and get closer as I go. So I know I'm not terrible at art or anything, but I really want to improve to that level. And thank you - I really, really appreciate your comment about the art style fitting in with other manga on the shelf. :D
Rusty Knight at 2:40PM, May 30, 2007
I don't know what your talking about not doing a professional comic. I can crack open any manga on any shelf and your art style will par with it. And don't worry about paneling. As long as your not putting 9 squares, it's fine.
Redemption at 10:08PM, May 29, 2007
Thank you. :)
F_Allen at 3:03PM, May 29, 2007
great style :D
Redemption at 1:02AM, May 29, 2007
Wow - thank you, D0m and Jofo. Its hard to know what people will think of the comic until I hear back from them - so I'm incredibly encouraged by your words. Looks like its time to get off the computer and get back to doing page 11... :)
Jofo283 at 11:00PM, May 28, 2007
I definetly think you have potential. So I look forward to reading more. Faved!
D0m at 10:17AM, May 28, 2007
Cute penguins. Regardless of whether or not you think you're good, you have talent, and you should stick with it. I would have stopped reading on the second page if this wasn't interesting, but it is! Great job, and update SOON!
Redemption at 5:35PM, May 27, 2007
Thanks, Cthulhu! I wish I had as interesting ideas as you. That elder lemon still both scares and intrigues me all at the same time... xD
Cthulhu at 5:46PM, May 24, 2007
I wish my artwork was as good as yours...