Page 25
Redemption on Oct. 10, 2007
Once again, we meet up with Evans. He was sent out to retrieve his glasses in page 13, remember? Well, here's where the search led him.
Sorry for the delay in getting this up - the background was very time-consuming. Eventually I hope to replace this with a shaded version.
tammster at 9:25AM, March 2, 2010
Gang members. So much beautiful details. I really like seeing how much your improving over time. It looks cool.
Okie Dokie at 5:33PM, April 3, 2009
Nice style youre developing, I love how you use textures for backgrounds while keeping characters simple. Also this page has a nice composition in each panel.
Redemption at 1:08AM, Oct. 15, 2007
Thanks, Bocaj! I've been feeling a bit down about the plot, so thanks for the encouragement! A high five right back at ya, Bocaj! LOLZombies is going well and developing nicely. Lets keep up the good work. :D
Bocaj at 7:54PM, Oct. 14, 2007
I read through them all now! I'm up to date. I'm enjoying it. Your art style is developing/improving, and your plot is getting thicker! Bravo, and a high five.
Redemption at 9:33PM, Oct. 13, 2007
Thanks, Mutation! Its good to be at this milestone -- though I'm always looking forward, to improving more and more. :nod: You like his eyes? :3 Aww thanks! I'll remember that for future comic pages... :D
Mutation at 8:15PM, Oct. 13, 2007
You know, he should stay without sunglasses, his eyes are all cool. Happy page number 25. n.n
Redemption at 12:16PM, Oct. 13, 2007
Thanks heaps, QSama! Ahhh - looking at the picture again, I can see how its easy to miss how the guy in the chair is the same one Evans is looking at. I hadn't considered the lines of sight - I'll keep that in mind for future. Thank you - you've given me good advice on how to improve on a number of occasions so far. :)
QSAMA at 9:50PM, Oct. 12, 2007
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 25TH PAGE! awsome backgound and great paneling also i like how youre varying your shots and angles a lil more one teensy lil nitpick tho, it would have been great if you had used an establishing shot of the dude sitting in the chair it took me a while to realize he was the same dude evans was looking at.
Redemption at 7:55PM, Oct. 11, 2007
Wow - thanks, Janen! I haven't had much experience in costume design, so I'm glad you like how the hooded guy turned out. Thanks for the rating, Demynx!
Janen at 6:53PM, Oct. 11, 2007
Well, your doing a pretty amazing job already so I guess backgrounds will be even more stunning. The hooded guy looks cool. I'll have better comments when I read the archives.
Redemption at 6:06PM, Oct. 11, 2007
Thanks, Kyupol! I'm trying to improve on them with each page, since they're something that usually give me trouble. :)
kyupol at 6:03PM, Oct. 11, 2007
you draw backgrounds well
kyupol at 6:03PM, Oct. 11, 2007
you draw backgrounds well
kyupol at 6:02PM, Oct. 11, 2007
you draw backgrounds well