Mimarin at 12:41PM, Sept. 24, 2006

"I sont usually make spelling mistakes" Is the most Ironic thing I read today.

zork_the_hedgehog at 6:47AM, Sept. 24, 2006

Dont worry the next one isnt going to be rushed

Rich at 6:03PM, Sept. 23, 2006

My advice is to NOT rush your comic. Take your time. After all, would you rather wait for a nice juicy steak or be fed a shit-sandwich right away? Comics work the SAME way.

zork_the_hedgehog at 5:08PM, Sept. 23, 2006

I sont usually make spelling mistakes, and Ill change it in a minute ok, I was in a bit of a rush to get this finished, so I made some crappy text boxes. dont worry, the next one will be much better quality, I can promise you that

Rich at 3:31PM, Sept. 23, 2006

This is a comic. NOT a storybook. We don't want a bunch of panels with only text. And the panels that DO have stuff have unreadable colored font and text blocks that don't even have a tail leading to the talking character!

speedingbullet at 3:29PM, Sept. 23, 2006

for one, you need to check your spelling, for two you need to upgrade your text boxes, and for 3 you need a better font, but otherwise, your comic might not turnout to be that bad.

lefarce at 3:24PM, Sept. 23, 2006

You lost me at "forums.themysticalforestzone.com"...

Mimarin at 3:10PM, Sept. 23, 2006

Oh God, I feel you are going to be one of these "immune to advice" spriters, but here goes: Firstly You spelled "Intense" wrong, on your first page, that ain't a good start. secondly you have colour coded text AND textboxes, this is completley needless, if you are making your text boxes/bubbles right you don't need it. Also it incorrectly applies distinction and tone to the voice of the character, characters with red text sound perpetually angry, that ain't good.