I made some “improvement” hope it helps a bit. And I know about my bad punctuation, there's some mistakes I noticed there but I don't feel like remaking the speech bubbles for more space.
WHOHOO! Matt's clone totally own'd him.
BTW- PM me if you need me to make a sprite for something your planning to have Matt do in the comic, i'll get a better floating sprite to you sometime soon
Kxela at 6:31PM, Dec. 1, 2006
ohh. this clearifies the last strip :P I like this plot driven sprite comic ^^ Guardians are enemies? neat
aznboii01 at 4:49PM, Oct. 20, 2006
Haha, just wait for chapter 2 The problem for this chapter is that there's not much action since it is really concentrate on Ken's death ;P
Earthdivine at 10:25PM, Oct. 19, 2006
Seems better, all I don't like is the lack of action for a MMZX comic. But don't take my word for THAT reason, I love to see fighting scenes
aznboii01 at 3:49PM, Oct. 18, 2006
haha, well as I stated before... Matt is strong :P, after all.. Ken's a weakling, he has courage though ;P.
The Angel of Ruin at 3:44PM, Oct. 18, 2006
WHOHOO! Matt's clone totally own'd him. BTW- PM me if you need me to make a sprite for something your planning to have Matt do in the comic, i'll get a better floating sprite to you sometime soon